Good day all,
My apologies for the further delay of the chapter, it has been finished and is currently being edited and adding some bonus content, which requires research.
The work is nearly finished and if you wish to enquire for specifics feel free to PM me Verbus here on .
Hope you all are having good days and will enjoy the next chapter when it comes out.

Don't rush the guy, Dovah.

This extremely long wait better be worth it.

Haha, German class has taught me to never trust Google. Must be ten times worse when it's from another planet.

Oh god. Why keep that? That was awful writing. It's completely inaccurate to what the flood can do and it was cringy.

All The Gravemind can do is control The Flood and be the most intelligent being in the galaxy and that's it. Possibly even give A.I. or organic beings with the logic plague.

Also that hint is the Neural Physics the Precursors can use which the Flood Gravemind can use because the Flood are the corrupt forms of the extinct race.

But here's the thing. That was introduced by 343 because during the days of Bungie. The Flood made no sense because they using the rule of cool. Bungie didn't know how to write consistent lore of the parasite.

Cut that fever dream. The writing will be a lot better for it.

When you get to halo 2 and when 6, Cheif, Shress, and Arbiter are being held by the Gravemind. Do not have that weird dream scene where 6 had a baby Elite.

That's not how The Flood works.

The stores getting good definitely different from the original I read before liking it so far I wonder what else is going to be different.

I'm am literally shaking with the need for more lol.
Keep it up I'm loving it you've already done it better and I'm now taking this as what has happened makes the end of reach much better

When you get to the beginning of halo 3. Cut that part of Chief pointing a gun a Shress which results Six pointing a gun at him. It's unnecessary drama and Chief won't understand a thing about romantic love.

Have it still be the arbiter

And just an FYI "buddy" Romeo is a fucking Orbital Dropped Shock Trooper. Spec ops special forces Spetznaz...that last ones just in case your English is as bad as your writing there trained to look death in the face and laugh its a big gap between them and Marines...go pick on a story called checkpoint if you want a story to pick at...its a story i personally enjoy but know you'll hate

Christ dude take a fucking chill pill...its a story and a fucking good one at that make your own damn story if you don't like certain soliders portrayed as cowards not every Marine is brave you have to remember most of them are all drafted and volunteers? There would be many but their still just people and your talking about a Zealot...a foe SPARTANs are cautious when facing...not every Marine is a hardcore leather neck warfighter some can be cowards...and the agent he's a damn office spook not every FBI CIA or even MI6 agent is a field agent who gets their hands dirty so ONI would easily be the same you've obviously just been a fuckwit trying to rile people up so take your shit and fuck off this is a good story with good people behind it

Thanks for that recommendation, now I have another story to enjoy along with this one. Hope you're doing well writer person, cuz I'm definitely not.

I am sorry to notice that a guest has reviewed your lovely story only to simply find they didn't like it and then completely blow up on it for no good reason, yes this story has some problems but not to the point that the guest is describing them, honestly the mistakes are mostly small grammar or spelling mistakes that dont really affect the reading of this story, so please guest if you truly hate how this story is going then why are you still reading, furthermore as soon as you found out that this story was going to be more romance involved why didn't you simply leave, this story is for those who enjoyed the original and hated to see it unfinished, so they rewrote it.
Anyway rant over hope y'all are safe and happy, cuz I just started working at the local restaurant and honestly it sucks, but enough about me can't wait until you post the new chapter I'll be waiting.
Regards,
Allthingsconsidered99.

God dammit Guest. If you don't want to read this story, THEN DON'T READ THIS STORY. Constructive criticism is almost always good, but you are just calling people retards and complaining about a story you keep reading/commenting on. This is a fucking romance story, not a military tactics story or whatever.

Some perceived lore mistakes. Spartan shields are from reversed engendered Jackal shields and Ghost of Onyx shows UNSC is testing covie weapon and armor. As a Alien prisoner shress should be Stripped of EVERYTHING, and held in Handcuffs that are made for Spartans.

And Vale is to Liberal. I mean She is VERY VERY VERY preachy. Super On the nose preachy to. I mean she made the comment “You would Make a cute couple” to a Spartan and Elite. They are 27 years into a genocidal civil war they won’t make comments like that unless they are Sgt. Johnson about to go into battle and he trying to relax the platoon before they get sent on a suicide op.

Please let these be fixed in the next chapter I mean i know what this story is but ya shouldn’t MAKE the characters act like 21st Century mellinials, Remember the Human race is now SURVIVORS of genocide they are hardened against practically everything.