| Reviews for An Orthodox Mountain |
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Moi chapter 2 . 7/15 Nice meme |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22 fuck you cunt don't read |
shaysa123 chapter 2 . 4/26 HAHAHHAHA the Skyrim reference got me, haha can't wait for more of this story keep ok keeping on! |
Linarian chapter 3 . 3/22 It's painful to know I'll likely have to wait quite a while for an update :( |
MystiYew chapter 3 . 3/4 I do so love this so far. Make me more please. |
MystiYew chapter 1 . 3/4 A really nice start. We didn't really develop an emotional attachment, but it was written well enough that it still had some impact. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/4 huh writing style was fine when your just informing readers about the past, but its not very descriptive and readers like an unending train of thought from someone with ADHD. At best your still just TELLING whats happening. That works for essays and book reports but its not meant for anything else! No successful author does this. It can be used! Very briefly and in small doses. Not for an a entire chapter/story. This is essentially no better then a quick script. |
ragnarok042501 chapter 2 . 3/2 Those last few lines there have told me I'll like this story. |
Lifelessman chapter 1 . 2/26 Good Work...! 1 |
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 1/21 Great |
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 1/21 Heehehehehe memes yah noce |
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 1/21 Noce |
Dreamville chapter 3 . 12/23/2019 Okay man, you've got me. I really like this so far. I like the setting, I like the character, now we will eventually see if I like the plot. But for now, excellent job, you've got my favorite/follow. |
Energy flow chapter 3 . 12/18/2019 This is really good. I like the pacing and it's fast update. Keep up good work! |
Lazymanjones96 chapter 3 . 12/16/2019 Interesting stuff looking forward to more |