Holy shit this must be one of the most underrated fanfics of all time. Sooooo good I loved it, please make a book two

Just wanted to say I loves this story and it scratched that itch for a new and original fan fiction that didn't seem like a port reread of all the others I've read. Thank you for the enjoyment of reading this story and the amazing inspiration to try for one of my own.

This is the 5th time I’m reading your story and I just thought, hey, why haven’t I written a review b4? So, first of all, this is the best non-pairing story I have read. It is absolutely wonderful. No grammar to be criticized, the plotline is awesome, and you didn’t make Percy too too OP. I love how there is an Annabeth break-up scene, and Artemis, but no PERTEMIS. I love Zoë, and the infamous one-fingered salute. I’m supposed to be doing something else rn, so I’m not going to write the whole review that I was planning on, which would be super-long, so I need to pull an Apollo (crappy haikus)

Damn, I love this fic
The Wanderer is so cool
Awesome fic writer

Lol! Just thought I'd mark the ironic-ness of wishing 2020 was 'a time of stability and improvement'

BM15

(PS - I mean no disrespect, just commenting on what gave me a little joy in this bleak time)

(PPS - My PMs are malfunctioning, hence why this is a review.)

wow...just wow, this is the single best story i have ever read. honestly thank you so much for this it has truely made my day better

Probs the most underrated story, it was amazing

I LOVE THIS STORY! It has trials and hardships perfectly without overpowered gits. This was good.

Is there a pairing?

This was a great story, I don't think I have come across one that I loved as much as this one!

"blackjack leading another rebellion, better ask percy"

that was one of the funniest things ive ever read!

I have read way to much percy jackson fanfiction and I thought that there wern't really unique stories that I hadn't read anymore but this is amazing.

besy book pj fanfic i've read in a while.

im not gonna lie im kinda imagining percy in this look like a less buff version of reinhart from overwatch

This was a fantastic read well done

You are a genius. I love this but some parts don’t quite line up. When Hazel meets Zoe she asks what her name is despite Percy having already told her. The mistake though minor has been replicated a few times throughout the books. Little pieces that just don’t line up. I love this book though. My favourite Percy Jackson fanfic and I’ve been reading them for years. Sorry if I seem like I’m nitpicking.

P.S. Neram is a great character. Can I borrow his idea? The mysterious mentor who never gives a straight answer and is also a sophisticated, almost snobbish, aristocratic man?

Im not gonna bother saying anything because theres no way nobody beat me to it. XD

Ima just say that percy would have a coniption fit if he got partial immortality and annabeth didnt. Also the nemean pekt did come out as a pelt, but the mist altered it to look like a duster when percy put it on. (Or rather it transformed)