| Reviews for The last straw |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/28 ALMOST CRIED. Please, pretty please, sequel? |
Dee chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 Good story, should be a start. |
IWillBecomeAddicted chapter 1 . 12/18/2019 Please make one more chapter! This is amazing! |
Mr.DarcyForever chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Oooo! Please continue this! I love this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2019 This is going good I can’t wait for more |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Please do update it’s great |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 This is really good I hope that there is going to be more chapters |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 PLEASE CONTINUE AND MAKE THIS MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER! PLEASE THIS IS SO GOOD AND HEARTBREAKING |
SkoRn3d chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 This is exactly what I wish had happened. Even if you didn’t (in your head or with a later sequel) go the “he'll come around when he sees what my magic does for him” route, I still would prefer Merlin to have told him early and just left when (WHEN) Arthur was an ass. This opens up to a heck of a lot more substance the OG I reckon. |
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 So sad. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 I need to see how Arthur is going to react to Merlin gone and to see where Merlin goes next |
Assassin of Syria chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 We need an update real soon. |
emrysmorgan chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Is Merlin will leave Camelot? Please continue to write this story. I want to know what will happen |
CocoRocks chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Amazing. I love your characterization of Merlin. He really is a brave man. |
mersan123 chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Excellent. I am so glad you gave Merlin the courage to realise (finally) that he was fighting a losing battle. In my own mind I see Merlin leaving to join the Druids. Here he could finally learn about his magic and protect his people properly. Sigh. Thanks Archaeologist. Loved it. |