Reviews for The last straw
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
ALMOST CRIED. Please, pretty please, sequel?
Dee chapter 1 . 12/19/2019
Good story, should be a start.
IWillBecomeAddicted chapter 1 . 12/18/2019
Please make one more chapter! This is amazing!
Mr.DarcyForever chapter 1 . 12/10/2019
Oooo! Please continue this! I love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2019
This is going good I can’t wait for more
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
Please do update it’s great
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
This is really good I hope that there is going to be more chapters
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
PLEASE CONTINUE AND MAKE THIS MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER! PLEASE THIS IS SO GOOD AND HEARTBREAKING
SkoRn3d chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
This is exactly what I wish had happened. Even if you didn’t (in your head or with a later sequel) go the “he'll come around when he sees what my magic does for him” route, I still would prefer Merlin to have told him early and just left when (WHEN) Arthur was an ass. This opens up to a heck of a lot more substance the OG I reckon.
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
So sad.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
I need to see how Arthur is going to react to Merlin gone and to see where Merlin goes next
Assassin of Syria chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
We need an update real soon.
emrysmorgan chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
Is Merlin will leave Camelot? Please continue to write this story. I want to know what will happen
CocoRocks chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
Amazing. I love your characterization of Merlin. He really is a brave man.
mersan123 chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
Excellent. I am so glad you gave Merlin the courage to realise (finally) that he was fighting a losing battle.
In my own mind I see Merlin leaving to join the Druids. Here he could finally learn about his magic and protect his people properly.
Sigh.
Thanks Archaeologist. Loved it.