| Reviews for Third Time's the Charm |
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saoyuuki12 chapter 21 . 8h Isnt like Visha a daughter of a noble of the Russy Empire or something? |
Demon Lord Mazoku chapter 38 . 7/21 The suspense, the new take on the original plot, the stakes; I like this story but now I'm worried nothing will be able to catch my attention like this one did for konosuba. You have my gratitude. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/10 The only major problem i have with this story is being x it would be better if you left him out of the story |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10 You should make tanya 18 or 19 and give her an athletic but busty body and pair her off with darkness. Tanya always felt like a bit of a sadist to me so she would pair good with darkness |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10 The konosuba hack items dont have drawbacks otherwise no one would ever take them. You should make your tanya a busty adult since this isnt a canon story. Also the way you have nerfed tanya has almost completely ruined this story |
eseer chapter 17 . 7/7 how did kazuma figure out chris is eris, but not Second Lieutenant Degurechaff? |
KonosubaFan64 chapter 15 . 7/6 Minor nitpick and not to diss your OC Gerrard but Axel already has a chief of police. Her name is Aloerina and is desperate to find a rich husband. She only appears in volume 15 and in a short story where she arrests Megumin for causing explosions near town. |
L4 of the WEST chapter 38 . 6/21 well that fun read |
Imperial warlord chapter 38 . 6/20 Awesome chapter. |
wolf girl811 chapter 38 . 6/20 I know for a fact being x set up that pedo into a position of power just for Tanya you don't think he gonna do it again? |
setokayba2n chapter 38 . 6/20 Too bad there will be no schedule, the story is good, and it's bad that maybe it could be forgotten. I wonder if Kazuma knew about the full past of Tanya if he could try to help her or not, at last she is in a big position so if he help her, she could help him, but the NEET have bad luck and don't do things just because |
Mernom chapter 38 . 6/20 Character development keeps going. I especially like the Mitsurugi developments. It turns a situation that was originally a gag into a completely logical conclusionit even explains his fascination with Aqua! |
NightmareKnight1 chapter 38 . 6/20 Wow... this story really makes me hate the gods of this universe (Or multiverse I suppose). They're acting like spoiled little children (A part of me is sure that comparison was already made somewhere in prior chapter) and I absolutely hate it. Not that I hate the story. Story's great. If you can write a believably convincing antagonist, enough to make someone absolutely hate them just by hearing what they're doing, then you're doing a damn good job. |
Forum Explorer chapter 38 . 6/20 Well lets see here: Kazuma just got sent off to launch explosions far away from town. At say, a certain castle for example. Evan naturally mistakes this as an attack for Tanya, and decides to attack first, but not before sending a message to the Demon King that Tanya had betrayed him. Tanya is at home with a hangover and misses Evan's attack, who gets flooded out by Aqua, which just happens to destroy the coffee supply in Axel. I think that would manage to destroy pretty much everything that's 'going right' for Tanya. Also I love the idea that Mitsurugi is the beard for those two girls and that they are his. That's really clever. |
Sprengkamp chapter 38 . 6/19 Th for the chapter |