Azula hmm? This wouldn’t be a character based of atla would it? Hahaha.

Hurray - thanks for writing this!

Awww, thank you soooo much! Absolutely LOOOOOVVVVEEEDDD this chapter!33333 Love it when Natsu let's his crazy fly :D Cant wait for part two, but I will do so patiently. Thank you for giving us amazing reading material 3

that made me cry a little, i am glad natsu came to save lucy and take her to this wonderful place, fairy tail!

So good and yay Natsu for beating his butt! Glad to see Lucy rescued, hope they see Michelle again, was hoping they would take her with then, at least a little ways, because I hate the thought of Michelle being there (didnt read the previews so if she is mentioned yay), but understand if she gets left behind. Looking forward to the next part!

finally... FINALLY this fucker of a king got what he deserved and I'm so happy that Natsu and Lucy are reunited ! I'm really excited to read what you've got in store for part two! I'll definitely stick around and will wait for the next part (even though I seriously don't want to... I want to read it NOW (not rushing you hereGreat story , great writing, I just love it.

AYEEE SIRRRR

As always a stellar chapter! So excited for your next series! I wait patiently impatient for it!

Absolutely loved reading this! Can't wait for part 2! some of this was a little unsettling but the depth it brought to the story was something I really appreciated. This is totally awesome!

Yui

OMFK! I dont care if it was a cliffhanger of an ending, this was fantastic. I will be waiting for the next installment. TYSVM

Great chapter again. Can't wait to see what's next

Great ending to part 1 ! so is part 2 is a separate story, you should post here when its up so no one misses it

That was so good! Exceeded my expectations. I’m so excited for more!

Holy cow what an ending. Very satisfying to see the king get his comeuppance. I'm very excited for part 2. Your fics are some of my all time favorites. I can't wait to read the next installment!

So I forgot ro mention that I really appreciate how you made Natsu's character. Like he's really sick with transportation which made the travel more difficult (oh and Lucy's going to find that out) and Natsu's heightened senses were only activated during his Dragon Force. You made him more human and that's so cool! Haven't seen anyone did that before. Anyway, I just can't let this out of my mind and I have to tell you. Thanks again!

Oh my god! That was perfect! I almost cried when Natsu came and Lucy was looking at him.. remembering all the pain she's been through and now here's her hero. I wonder how they'll talk about all the stuff that was revealed to them both in this chapter. Really excited to see how their relationship will really develop. And that was a perfect ending for part one. So excited for part two.. I was wondering how Natsu will break up with Lisanna though I hope she'll be cool with that. Anyway, no need to rush a good story! I'm really thankful you're writing this good stuff. Will be waiting for The Runaway and The Rebel (I even love the title)!