Reviews for Lifted
Guest chapter 9 . 8/25
Junior: "What are you going to do when that special lady asks you to make her her favorite drink, huh?"

Yang: "It's a Strawberry Sunrise, just in case you're wondering."

Maybe it's my shipping goggles, but this made me think Yang's also crushing on Jaune. Felt like it could be in Breaking Through the Bottom of the Bottle.

Really liked the writing for a drunk Pyrrha. Keep up the good work. Hope life is well
Guest chapter 11 . 8/23
Sorry for the double reply. Thought the first one didnt go through
AL chapter 11 . 8/22
Oomph, that last line man. Hits deep.

Still another great chapter man. Though I feel that Em here could easily lie to Cinder by blaming the White Fang for leading huntsmen to the location. Hell, her intervention caused plenty of damage to the cities faith in their protectors, plus removing evidence of any partners. Seem she could slip out of this one if she tried.

Still, thats up to you how you want it to playout. And, I have no-doubt that whatever you do, will be just as fun as this one.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/21
"Emerald has surprisingly weak performance despite how cheesable her Semblance is."

That's a good point. It's understandable that Emerald would try fighting fair against Pyrrha to prove the combat knowledge she taught Jaune actually worked, but otherwise she should be winning 1v1 altercations barely lifting a finger. We've seen plenty of examples of Emerald using her semblance to completely alter someone's perception of reality - with this latest memory lane showing it can affect all five senses - so why does she opt to use it just enough to have an edge on Blake instead of overwhelming her with illusions in a basically life or death situation?
Guest chapter 11 . 8/20
Guest "how cheesable her Semblance is" I didn't think about it until you mentioned it, but with the horrifying things Emerald's made people experience - especially in this Memory Lane that specifies she can target all five senses - it's a wonder her fight with Blake goes so terribly. I can understand trying to fight Pyrrha fairly to prove the combat knowledge she taught Jaune was useful, but she should be winning 1v1 altercations while barely lifting a finger. Some kind of integrity Papa Arc instilled in her force her to fight fair?
CakeJoe chapter 11 . 8/20
Didnt know i needed this! Love the dynamic.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/11
Emerald has surprisingly weak performance despite how cheesable her Semblance is.
MULTIMEDIAMAN chapter 11 . 8/13
Qrow Branwen, as I live and breathe!

Ya dun good, boss. Ya done good.
X3runner chapter 11 . 8/11
Awww emerald got the first lip smooch that’s just hilarious
razmire chapter 11 . 8/10
The she-devil has arrived, and disaster shall follow.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/10
Im glad this is back
Guest chapter 11 . 8/9
Hell yeah new chapter and hell no EM’S FUCKED!
undeadyeti chapter 11 . 8/10
You have returned at the turning of the tide.
kingthe13 chapter 11 . 8/9
Damn the Mini story got dark fast fandom wars are no joke.
Stickginge chapter 11 . 8/9
Glad to see this back, was worried about you two
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