| Reviews for What If |
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JediA chapter 1 . 5/17 this was amazing! |
Bookfanatic320 chapter 1 . 4/7 I loved this so much. Like I literally loved it so much with all the little details you wrote in...Jay watching Hailey clean the rifle, the hand thing when she was in quarantine, the things Jay was thinking of when Will was talking about seeing the person you love nearly die, Jay worrying in the beginning...Gosh, so many good moments! Ones that we deserved to see in the actual crossover but sadly we got little to no upstead. I will forever be a little mad about that but this fic makes up for it 10000000 percent! And the fact you wrote it from Jay's pov, it was so perfect! I'm not very good at writing male perspectives but you killed it which is good because I love reading it from Jay's point of view and Hailey's but Jay's is more uncommon I think. Oh my goodness, I could talk forever and gush over this fic and never get tired. I loved it so much! Please, please please do more of these episode inspired fics because you are so talented. And I love anything with upstead! Okay, I'm gonna go read this like 15 more times... |
cyberfun chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 What if in 7*04, Hailey is the snipper when Jay is required to cut himself, what if the knife is already infected by the bacteria, and what if the shot comes later than Jay sprays on his wound and Jay ends up in ED? |
lylaaahh chapter 1 . 12/6/2019 this was actually so good wow. keep it up! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2019 Ahhh I’m not sure how I missed this, I LOVE it. Please keep writing one shots; they are my favorite! Great writing |
Elvira25 chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 Absolutely amazing and I enjoyed it so much. Hopefully you'll write more Upstead one-shots or stories. Thank you. |
nonna99 chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 I really hope Jay didn't wait, but that would be another chapter. Nevertheless great story, enjoyed it a lot. |
Lauren chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 Absolutely adore this story and I loved to read more. You sort leave us with a cliffhanger, what happened, what's Jay gonna do. I so wish to know. Anyway thanks for sharing and looking forward to more. |
JONI chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 I know this is a one-shot, but I so wish to see an update of this story. Anyway thanks for an amazing story and looking forward to more. |
Halton chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 I love this so much it’s just the perfect companion to what we weren’t given in the episode! I can’t wait for more one shots and an update to your other story! Little blue eyed babies everywhere! |
augus10 chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 A lot of "What If." I just wish he goes for it. Wish you continue this amazing story. Anyway thanks for sharing. |
Margie chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Loved it. Loved to read more, especially about the "What If's" if they becomes true. Nevertheless really great chapter. |
Britt chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Such an amazing story. Wish there was more. Thanks. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 Amazing. More please. |
MandyGordon chapter 1 . 11/4/2019 Enjoyed it and would love more, CPD just isn’t scratching my itch for Upstead lately. Thank you |