| Reviews for Sword and Claw |
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Darkus Basically chapter 17 . 7/21 I like this whole story a lot to be honest. I guess this question has already been asked/answered but I don't know so: Will there be more chapters? |
doxod0879 chapter 17 . 7/13 I was waiting for this! Oh men, I certainly wasn't expecting another hero showing up this soon! And she seems have gone through alot of stuff. Damn, I really felt bad for Lilith as she was loathing herself to the point of rejecting the idea of being in a celibate relationship with Adam. (Though I still can't help but to find her words of "He deserves someone better than me." sweetly ironic, considering how things end up in canon.) |
Blessed chapter 17 . 7/11 Oh this brings up an interesting idea, I wonder if Lilith will get blessed as a hero before the church learns she is a demon? |
FelgrandDragon chapter 17 . 7/11 Good to hear from you again. Rounding out the dwarven arc with some cool weapons and developing more of the characters. I especially like how you added the introduction of the previous hero and showing a glimpse into what is going on in the wider world. I'm almost expecting a big reveal that a new Demon Lord has appeared early and that our heroes our the only ones with any ability to fight this new army. Love the growth and idea of this story, keep at it and carry us to the end. |
TheEmeraldMage chapter 17 . 7/11 First off, glad to see you back again on this, because I was getting a bit worried. Thankfully, you were able to get the chapter done. As for it, Lillth and Adam finally got their weapons and Lilith was feeling those 'feelings' again which will lead to some bad news if those feelings go out of control at some point. I do think that she is being a bit negative in thinking that Adam will not love her, considering everything they have done together at this point. I understand why but at least she should be a bit more optimistic. Justinia sounds like an interesting hero though I hope she won't be fighting Lilith and Adam later down the road due to the fact that a monster and hero are working together. I think that fight will happen but for now the chapter was good. Can't wait for the next one and stay healthy and safe! |
Guest chapter 16 . 6/7 I'm pretty sure the reason why Kenkou Cross didn't mention metals is largely due to the fact that common fantasy metals are already common knowledge and that if it doesn't do anything unusual (aka. demon silver, which is best described as "Spell-jamming aphrodisiac taser"), there's no need to specially mention it and subsequently restricting a species/race to using a specific material only. I mean, the entire series sounds like an NSFW RPG guidebook... |
doxod0879 chapter 16 . 6/6 I absolutely loved the scene where Lilith reveals the truth about the inner desire of the monsters to attack humans, as well as how this desire manifests in her in wanting to corrupt Adam. But rather than saying anything, he hugs her... The fact that they are revealing their secrets and worries to each other shows just how far their relationship has come! |
TheEmeraldMage chapter 16 . 6/6 Oh I think some romantic sparks are flying between the 2 of them! Would make perfect sense for a dwarf to instantly figure out that Lilith is a succubus considering that they're usually very adept at knowing other mythical creatures. Very intrested to see how it all goes into like it would be in Canon were you don't see any of the other monsters or mythical creatures except for the female monsters. I also have a nagging suspicions probably to lead to a big bloody battle that's gonna kill all the guy monsters and that's why all we have is just the female ones but who knows. Adam finally got a new sword and Lilith has some new equipment so hopefully when they go to the next area they won't be as much of a disadvantage as they've been throughout most of the Ark. All in all a pretty good returning to form chapter as well as a good insight on our 2 main leads and how they are in terms of their relationship. Nicely done and stay healthy and safe! |
TheEmeraldMage chapter 15 . 6/4 Well it is very interesting to read a monster girl encyclopedia fan fanfiction that has nothing to do with the girls screwing the guys as is tradition for the series and instead have a plot. A real plot that actually tries to develop and evolve in this specific world and so far it ain't half bad. Adam and Lilith's growh with each other, along with their growing feelings is pretty realistic for the most part, especially since again Lilith has zero intention of riding Adam. Same goes for the inclusion of other races that aren't the usual monster girl fair as you have dwarves and even specific other monsters that actually have male variants. Which again it will take a lot of getting used to considering that most of the lore of this world just seems to have female monsters. There are some things that I will bring up that are of little strange like how it feels like whenever one thing happens in the story we just get like a glossed over version of what characters are doing and when characters are having conversations sometimes we get the normal conversations other times we just get here's the cliff notes version of the conversation. Granted it does cut off the repetitive and this character said this scenario but I don't know what to think. Not to mention again it will take a lot of getting used to for the fact that since there's guy monsters now it means that the girl monsters don't try to go after male humans anymore and try to rape them like in canon except now they outright kill them. But in spite of these though I am enjoying what I'm reading and I'm definitely digging the budding developing relationship between Adam and Lilith as it does feel very believable and the fights while little bit odd at times do get the job done. As it is, this is very good and can't wait to read the rest of this! |
doxod0879 chapter 15 . 5/23 A story about the beginnings of the Demon Lord and her husband is something I have always been curious about, and in my opinion you are doing an absolutely wonderful job at telling their story! (Well, your interpretation of their tale but the point still stands!) Plus... I love stories about 2 people that start out as complete strangers that slowly start to build a beautiful bond with each other. Another thing I am loving is showing how the many monster species used to be before monster girls were a thing. I will always be looking forward as to what's next on this story! |
PROFIT chapter 1 . 5/18 Very good, but i think is strange that four heroes felt scared of a Harpy Flock when they are described as a One Man Army who can face a thousand men alone and win. |
N0GoodName chapter 14 . 5/16 This was a fantastic chapter and I loved reading it. The action was well written and I loved the ending. The chemistry between Lilith and Adam was brilliant as well. I honestly can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work. |
JJAndrews chapter 15 . 5/17 Dwarves are one of my favorite fantasy races ever and I'm really looking forward to what comes next. Keep up the great work. |
FelgrandDragon chapter 15 . 5/16 Questions begin to form: why would the goddess of the sea help both humans and monsters when the supreme goddess only protects humans? . . .or does she? A short chapter, but a good break point between adventures. We're starting to see monsters as sane and even reasonable, key to creating Kross's world. Keep it up. |
N0GoodName chapter 13 . 4/26 Ok this story is pretty damn good. It's really entertaining to read something for this fandom that actually has a good story to it. Keep up the good work. |