I enjoyed it even if it did make me cry. I'm honestly surprised there isn't more stories like this with what naruto goes through.

Oh wow, I had to stop and wipe off the tears before I could finish the story a couple of times. You captured the emotions so beautifully and fully!

I have to say, I’m impressed after reading this.
Not to many people still write the whole revenge style fic anymore, and even few do it very well but I got invest into this one after reading only a short bit of it.

The only thing that I was confused about is why the other genin were brought in? I didn’t really feel like it was necessary since none of them cared if Naruto would have died in the first place (other then like Hinata, Shikamaru, and Choji), and the fact that they would probably have been more terrified from the Kyuubi chakra to go investigating?

Very nice. Almost had me cry lol.

really sad, but hoped for at least a worse ending for konoha

interesting, and i really hope you plan naruto escape make everyone having a hand in his pain pay hard. And have naruto claim his full inheritance. and don't care about the consequences for konoha.

i cried everytime reading this, thats was hard to read

pretty good. It would of been awesome if you had there spirits appear before the living so everyone would of know whos son he was. it would of made people reallise what they have done.

I'd love to see more of this

Please keep this going I want to know what happens next.

Very good story. I agree with you on stories like you mentioned. While Naruto is all about forgiveness and enduring, I always thought that there are pains that are too far to forgive. Naruto forgiving everyone who ever hurt him is unrealistic. Seeing the deluge of stories where Naruto suffers so much and shrugs it off without so much as a grimace sometimes annoys me. I'm glad to see stories where reality kicks in and shows no one can forgive every slight done to them. This could have potential to become a full story or at least have a sequel to possibly show everyone's reaction to these events or how things change due to Naruto's change. All in all. a nicely done story.