Reviews for A New World of Magecraft
gerahdz.sanchez chapter 5 . 7/14
This is really a incredible story, thank you for making it
FAKETarzan chapter 5 . 7/13
I hope you come back to this story because apart from genuinely loving it, it is also unique when compared to every other fate and rwby crossover. The others either have Shirou enter Beacon as a student, janitor, or as a teacher( depending on if he is Archer Emiya or just an older Shirou). Meanwhile this one focuses on Salem, who is criminally underused. This story also works out so well because of the version of Shirou that you chose, as a UBW or a FSN Shirou would get manipulated by Ozpin instead. This story has so many new possibilities that it makes me hope it gets an update soon( this was actually the first Fate and Rwby crossover I read, as I found out about it through Alex Kellar’s art on it). This also led me to read and enjoy your other stories, including making me like the crack pairing of Shirou and Mata Hari. Anyways, I look forward to reading your other works, so be safe and have a good day!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16
Cuando más cap
Vanessa Masters chapter 4 . 6/13
Now the room was silent. And as the black mist evaporated and spread, Shirou could see that despite the many crack and scratches in the walls, there was nothing else left.

"I gave you life," Salem hissed from Shirou's back. "And you dare to turn on me? Like this?"

"Sorry?" Shirou asked as he took a few steps away and turned around, uncertain whether apologizing would make the situation better or worse.

"Yes, you are." Salem said snippily as she spun on her heels to face him, her arms still crossed over her chest. She leveled an angry blue eye onto Shirou.

Shirou dropped his gaze meekly getting ready for his reaming for destroying her magical constructs.

"However, it only makes sense," the queen sighed in reluctant resignation. "My, what is a good word, 'curse' as you called it, had some side effects that I found to be of remarkable utility. I should have expected that breaking the curse would result in those side effects being removed. To blame you for that would be folly on my part."

Shirou blinked.

He looked up, shock ringing through him. He had just inflicted a painful bond removal effect onto the queen, caused her subjects to impromptu revolt, and damaged her throne room while bothering her for directions, and she wasn't going to ream him out for it?

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Yep.

This is a great read.

There’s an idea, did the brothers go to create other worlds?

And Salem, freaking out internally over multiple godson another world.
Vanessa Masters chapter 3 . 6/13
Now the room was silent. And as the black mist evaporated and spread, Shirou could see that despite the many crack and scratches in the walls, there was nothing else left.

"I gave you life," Salem hissed from Shirou's back. "And you dare to turn on me? Like this?"

"Sorry?" Shirou asked as he took a few steps away and turned around, uncertain whether apologizing would make the situation better or worse.

"Yes, you are." Salem said snippily as she spun on her heels to face him, her arms still crossed over her chest. She leveled an angry blue eye onto Shirou.

Shirou dropped his gaze meekly getting ready for his reaming for destroying her magical constructs.

"However, it only makes sense," the queen sighed in reluctant resignation. "My, what is a good word, 'curse' as you called it, had some side effects that I found to be of remarkable utility. I should have expected that breaking the curse would result in those side effects being removed. To blame you for that would be folly on my part."

Shirou blinked.

He looked up, shock ringing through him. He had just inflicted a painful bond removal effect onto the queen, caused her subjects to impromptu revolt, and damaged her throne room while bothering her for directions, and she wasn't going to ream him out for it?

—-

Ooops no more controlling Grimm. But she still has her magic, and immortality most likely.
Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 6/13
"Sorry, what did you say?" Shirou asked. "Magic is lost from this iteration of mankind? As in, it existed in the past and is no longer in the present?"

The woman eyed him, some caution in her eyes.

"A Semblance is not magic," the queen stated as definitively as Sella would have while colored balls of fire, water, earth and other things appeared floating in the air around her. "The more tangible manifestation of one's Aura, no matter how versatile does not compare to the versatility or power of magic. Whom taught you that a Semblance and Aura was magic?"

"No one," Shirou replied honestly. "I have no clue what you mean by aura or semblance. My dad taught me some magecraft and I practiced it on my own until my sister helped me to learn some more but I was told we used magic circuits, foundations, and the reenactment of Mystery."

For a long moment, the woman considered what Shirou had said.

"Are you perhaps trained in a school or discipline of magic?" Salem asked. "If so, say the name."

"School of magic?" Shirou furrowed his brow. "You mean like Material Transmutation? I am not very good but I can do Reinforcement, Structural Analysis, Projection, and my unique spell, Tracing. I was taught the basics for Alteration but haven't had time to refine that yet."

Compared to Illya and Rin, or even Sella, Shirou was a failure of a magus. Something that Illya had despaired of when she had discovered his limitations and set about to correct with intensive teaching. Though, the later discovery of his potential Reality Marble and ability to Trace and copy Noble Phantasms had redeemed his lack of versatility in Illya's opinion.

This queen on the other hand was actually impressed if Shirou was reading her ascended eyebrows right.

"Not possible," she spoke to herself. "No single Semblance could do all those. Transmuting should be possible of most of those feats but analyzing the structure would be beyond a single Semblance if the names are honest indications of the spells."

Her red and black eyes snapped onto Shirou's, a terrible majesty and hope filling them.

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Impressive. And him showing off his magic, and making her human!

Omg! I saw fanart of this and had to find it!

Salem didn’t think her Grimm body was the curse, only the immortality!
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 6/13
Intrigue!
EMIYA KURO chapter 5 . 5/21
Amazing... Really amazing! Please continue! I'd pay good money to see this continue!
Uday Sra chapter 5 . 5/14
Awesome
Ferno16 chapter 5 . 4/26
Salem create the foundation to spread magic to the public all for the sake of spitting on the Brothers eyes? Please! Have her successfully make it happen! Oh sure people of Reament will suffer for their own stupidity, and that's what makes it worth it!
Zaralann chapter 5 . 4/26
Wonderful!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/20
I'd laugh like an idiot too if I were Salem. Shirou is far too precious, he's so trusting that it's downright adorable.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17
Glad the MCs stupidity showed up early. Saved me some time
reynardgautama chapter 1 . 3/29
Great and interesting story
jon02789555 chapter 5 . 3/11
update?
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