This was quite cute.

Awww. Fred melted. I love how the chater just ends like that.

I really enjoyed your characterization of Fred in this story and a unique view of events. One small thing though, you've classified this story as George and Eloise when it's really Fred...

I like this a lot :) Everyone is IC and Eloise is relatable and human.

Just two minor niggles in chapter two: colour "co-ordinated" rather than "coated", and "autumn" rather than "fall"; other than that, great!

This was a great story. I like how you started with an insecure character and turned her into a brave one. I also liked how the main character isn't pretty/talented at everything. Great moral. A bit mushy at times, but still, it was a really good story. )

So totally sweet and funny!

Great story! I loved it! :D

I actually read this story this past Thanksgiving but I didn't leave a review because I was afraid you'd take my honest feelings about it the wrong way but now since I see that you actually appreciate the honesty behind my reviews I'd just want to say that I feel that this story might've been stronger if you had just let Fred die at the end, like he did in DH and make Elle face her bullies without him. I think his death, combined with Elle coming to deal with it and coming out stronger in the end would've made for a more emotional finish.

And oh, this is offtopic but I just realized that the side plotline thingy you had in A Sketch of Character where Teddy tries to get to know little Scorpio is actually a great fanfiction story in itself, I'd love to see you write it.

Anyway, Happy New Year to you too

This one was one of my earmarked stories, like, FOREVER, because you wouldn't bloody update! It's so bittersweet, because we all know what really happens to Fred...

I thoroughly enjoyed what happened to Eloise, just another name in the books. Thank you for finally finishing it.

Oh amazing! I'm so glad you finished it :) Terrific job, very happy about the change you made from Deathly Hallows... that was so sad in the book :(

Great job! Loved it completely and utterly :)

OMG! O THANK GOD! THANK YOU~

It didn't happen exactly like in HPTDH, which makes me cry in relief!

*Sighs* So much for no drama.

Oh, well drama adds to the fun!

Please update SOON!

*squeals!*

And I love this Fred.

He's not a HUGE git, not even a little one.

And George doesn't use Fred as a clutch.

Yay!

O! This going to be a good one I just know it. But thus far I like ALL your stories, so ... However, this one seems more simple, not in a boring way but in a sweet way.

No huge drama, or arguing, just danged sweet.

Then again this was just the first chapter :-P

I really like this story. It's original, cute and funny. I don't know if you're still looking for a beta for it, but if you are, feel free to send me an email.