Lovely little piece! A lot a fun to read, I loved it! And you found a pretty good ending.

This is delightful!

This was like a box of chocolates. We never knew what we were gonna get.

This fanfic had teeth to it.

You left way too much open for this to be complete here. I hope you keep going! And i loved the fluffy teasing

This is one really nice story.
Personaly i would not mind of you were to continou it. ( hint, hint, nudge nudge)

No but really, i enjoyed how you wrote the interaction between the characters.

Cute cute cute! Happy Halloween! It was so nice to see the three of them, even with Ryoga having a hard time of it all. I love the line about the umbrella too~