You realize making your characters powerful, and then nerfing the shit out of them for some unseen reason just makes us all know you're a dumbass, right? You're a dumbass. Never write the rewrite, like we all know you won't.

What a joke kek

You've got this being Vanilla, yet had Edwin Van Cleef's daughter there, instead of Edwin, the actual original? I assume you don't actually know anything about WoW lore.

... ffs...

Hmm Sylvanas bend her over YESSSSS I'm like a dog in heat sylva bae

Interesting

Oh come on! You weren't THAT bad! I was actually hooked here, damnit!

I hope you do rewrite this soon it was a good story even with its inconveniences

Oh my... U killed harry here with is boosting of himself... I saw her lockedup and i killed ever demon with a sword and i just used my magic to cut his neck with my sword... See girls i hve pouch full of gold.. Keep the change...
And the purple elves swooning over him... Oh he is so modest...
WTF
I quit... It is clearly plagiarised fiction... With little modification here and there and u hve made it worse...
I just hve to remember the orginal fiction name to prove it...

This chapter looks like... I hve read before... Its of harry who is jyst thrown in this world by a ritual... He save tbe nightelves just like this... Your rune blade gave it away because that harry will too hve rune blade... And get along with that nightelve and her friend...
He will create any Harem here with all pretty woman of all races... Including the living dead fron forsaken...

I like what you had written and look forward to the rewrite. Keep up with the good work.

only problem really was that the "defias" plotline threw Harry too far down into the "Weeds" of the Warcraft world. Harry was the equivalent of a king. By no means whatsoever she he be out there screwing around dealing with the Defias. He should have scrub adventurers for stuff like this.

I think you'd be fine if you just backed the story up to the point of the kidnapping and Just had Harry delegate a few people into following up on everything. Harry shouldn't be doing any of that.

Np if you dont feel comfortable continuing theres no reason you should.
Personally i like the op harry but i can easily see how hard it would be to write.

I hope you keep him purging undead in the rewrite

Well these things happen. Good luck with your next projects.