This was excellent!

Seems like she's thinking short term. After killing a few dragons she won't need so much help to take one down.

Seems like she should at least go see the greybeards before jumping at any and every opportunity for power.

The last line about the Greybeards doesn't read right. I assume you forgot to add a word or something.

Glad to see her not jumping to burn sacrifice bodies.

Glad that she accepted. She has her priorities straight. She shouldn't need to pander to her followers or Stormcloaks.

I somehow doubt that raising ravens is that easy. Beating people up in armor is hilariously ridiculous as well now that you point it out. I guess they're expecting some of the opponents to be in armor as well. Or maybe Nords got tired of getting stabbed after taking it off.

Well at least she got something out of this venture. Other than being mutilated that is.

Too bad what happened to her teacher. It kind of seems like you're going out of your way to make injuries that magic can't heal though. Have they taken her to a Master of healing magic to try?

One more book done, congratulations. All around a wonderful read, especially Riften; it really seemed like a season or two of GoT, lol.

Thank you for sharing your work.
Happy Writing!

Lol, and now the fun begins.

Wish you well in these tough times. Being out of work has been a struggle but your story has brought many a smiles to my face. Take care and looking forward to book 3.

whoa

Love this story, can’t wait for the next book

ah Sam, the perfect example of a monkey wrench

wow

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