Oh you are just awful and no, I didn't figured anything out! *huff* first the kiss and now this? *Smh*

Noooooo! Cliff hanger! It was getting so good! I'm glad that Lauren has a friend with her now. Jon is a hoot! I think Bo knows about Marie and Rachel's secret relationship and have their love letters or She has a secret crush on teenage Lauren when she was in college with Tamsin. Lol! Idk! I'm so ready for the next chapter. Thanks for the update. Stay safe out there Faemily!

I wanted to add that I like a lot the new and intense (lol!) WolfPants friendship :) (as Wolf for Dyson & Pants because you know Hotpants :) )
So I purposely use this ship name for Dyson & Lo in reference to the show, (even if this friendship name was used by the Faedom only) because the bromance/man crush between Dyson & Jon made me think about the Lost Girl episode 2x05 "BrotherFae of the Wolves"where Dyson reunites with his long lost Wolf pack mate Cayden (and accessorily Bo's one- time lover/healer).
This said I wonder if I'm not wrong because Bo says "it has nothing to do with Madison"
I have to say that I find sssapphireee 's idea absolutely fantastic!:
"sssapphireee chapter 5 . 11h ago, My guess is that Bo is the writer of the book that Lauren is reading."

Yeah an update. I think you do such a great job at weaving in excerpts from the book Rachel. The last chapter was sad when Mavime died and this one was sad but a little hopeful. At least Marie knows Rachel is safe for now. I had a few laughs at Lauren's inner monologue. Especially when she wanted to duel Dyson. I think in Lauren's mind she is a tuff badass that no one should mess with. I can guess what Bo was going to say but I would probably be wrong. Looking forward to the date and how that will go. This was a really great chapter. Thanks again for your writings and I am looking forward to the next one.

My guess is that Bo is the writer of the book that Lauren is reading.

Such a good chapter for both stories! I don't know what Bo was going to say, so looking forward to the next chapter!

What is she trying to tell her? I have no idea. oh I cannot wait for the next one. I am loving this story.

Thank you/Merci, dear Ellen both for your Birthday wishes & the mommahs down to a T compliment :)
The BoLo story makes a big step and something tells me that this Bo's one of best mates could be very related to Lauren huh? :) Give me a T, give me a A, give me a M, give me the SIN she committed with Bo's ex, Madison

NO - I don't know what Bo was going to say! Hurry back with an update 'cause I really want to know what Bo has to say! By the way, I'm glad Lauren is never lonely because she has "me, myself, and I" to converse with : )

I'm enjoying Lauren's inner monologues/dialogues thus far...hoping (thinking?) maybe we will get to see more of Bo's inner thoughts as well? I liked the shift of their communication to a more intimate, personal level. Looking forward to seeing how you move them forward from here. I can only hope that the best mate isn't who I think it is, for Lauren's sake. Thank you for the time and effort needed to write your stories, especially one in which you're weaving two stories concurrently. I have trouble walking and chewing gum at the same time! :)

Poor Lauren...lol

That was terrific and very funny.

This story is so cute. Please update asap, I can't wait to see Lauren's response.

Hi dear Ellen, thank you & you're welcome :) you updated yesterday, right on my birthday! Merci beaucoup pour ce cadeau! :) The present times with BoLo was enchanting! an dplease, oh, please, keep the mamas in this story. Mama Lo & Mama Dyson :)) Mama Lo is a queen and already knows that Bo is Mrs Right for her daughter & Mama Dyson because, I hope she will help her son to realize that Bo's heart belongs to another one named Lauren. I'd like that the two mothers can meet :)
The 1940 scene was beautiful.
Thank you Ellen for this great & exciting chapter :))

Glad to hear you are safe and well during this crazy time! If I'm being honest, I originally found the "second" story within the story a little distracting; however, in this chapter, the 2nd story was itself riviting, and how you weaved it into the main story was well executed and powerful! Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Noooooo! I wanted more! Lauren's mom cracked me up! Didn't let her get a word in, lol! Lauren should be happy that her mom ask Bo out for her, cause she was really over thinking it. Sometimes you just have to be bold and just do it! I've miss this story. Thank you and ready for the next chapter