Loved this chapter! I’m so happy they finally saw each other again! Hoping it’s not so long between chapters anymore!

Please update soon

Natsu getting annoyed by fans is something that would definitely happen in canon!XD
and omg i can't believe I forgot that his keen sense of smell could help in finding Lucy. Im so happy he finally did it though!
can't wait to see what they talk about and if he manages to reassure her or not!

I'm happy Natsu found Lucy but now he have to wait until Lucy is back to her normal self.

this is great! I'm so glad Natsu finally found her... and that someone finally told him she dyed her hair. that was bothering me for a while. anyway, I'm glad we got to see some of the lead up to them meeting; it would've been different if you said something like "natsu ran into loke before seeing her" instead of showing their conversation like you did. I'm glad!
now we just gotta hope that Natsu doesn't scare her off. like, natsu, babe, don't tell her you love her immediately okay I can already tell that won't go over well
I like that you showed crocus going crazy over Natsu! that really highlights the fact that Lucy looks so different that she wasn't even recognized.
thanks for sharing this with us! the only thing I could possibly think this is missing is natsu and Lucy talking :P but I get the feeling we'll be seeing some of that soon so I won't complain

Whoa! Natsu almost reaches Lucy! But how will she react? Will it do more harm than good like Loke suspects? Great chapter! Dying to see what happens though! Stay awesome and keep on writing!

how you can make this awesome fanfic? *.*

its nice to see Lucy slowly show bits and pieces of her old self! although its sad that she hates herself every time someone shows the slightest bit of admiration towards her.
Wouldn't the guards recognize the gold key as a zodiac key though?
can't wait to see Natsu next chapter!im curious to know how far he's gotten..

Awesome chapter

I'm looking forward to seeing more Natsu next chapter! tbh I was just waiting for him to randomly show up at the magic shop. I suppose that was a bit too much to hope for, eh? ah well
thanks for sharing your work with us!

Yay! I can't tell you how eagerly I have been waiting for this chapter! I hope Lucy succeeds and builds her self confidence again as she faces the monsters...

Thank goodness Loke is such a devoted friend.

Should we be worried about the strange girl with the yellow eyes?

Keep on writing and please update as soon as possible!

I love this story! I have nothing against canon Lucy, but I like stories where she gets stronger, and I'm a sucker for drama and angst :D Please update soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter! I couldn't tell you had writers' block at all! I though it was wonderful :)

I always love every new chapter you post. I hope she can heal herself. The scene of Lucy's mental health issues always gets me so hard in the feelings. Can't wait for the next update. Be safe.

This chapter made my day!
Im so happy Natsu finally has a lead and knows where she's going though i have a suspicion that when he does get to Crocus, she'll be long gone.
it hurts to see him missing Lucy so much though!
I loved how you wrote Aquarius and how she apologized to Lucy and tried to comfort her!It really drives home how much her spirits care for her. Loke be making me cry with how much he's trying to be there for her though.