I cried :,(
I loved him and hated him

you should be very proud of yourself. one thing about fanfiction is that when you read ur favorite stories, it is still very difficult to envision characters as they were on cannon. you’re writing, however, imitates Richelle Meads so perfectly. marvelous job.

Loved it. Thank you.

it was a great story thank you so much. Virtual hug.

Amazing from stat to finish

Really loving these unusual developments.! This could could go anywhere...

When Rose and Dimitri are talking about her nightmares and talking about her traumas, well, Dimitri saw the videos and photos so he already knows a lot. I thought she'd be more open to talking about her feelings and things with him.

I think the plan is Rose like, but what feels unnatural is the was Rose is coping. No therapy, no talk about it, just harshly shoving everything her way: she saw the pictures, videos, went to the house and now is disguising herself as a prostitute... she should be traumatized to say the least.

I really don't see Rose in that position, so I'll try my best to skip it. I don't understand how it can be therapeutical to hit someone like that, but I'm no one to judge sexual preferences.

I find the whole spanking thing hilarious. Unneeded, but funny all the same.

Oh, that was cute

Why was Damian working in the prostitution ring anyway? No matter if he was being threatened, he’s a bad guy.

How could they abduct Nevaeh so fast?

She’s acting OOC right now... but it can be because of the trauma. Dimitri is the actual OOC

HAHAHAHAHA WTF? The dark mood just died! Why would he spank her? How does that fit into this? She’s traumatized because of everything that happened and he spanks her?