When I first started reading this story I didn’t know what to expect. Sometimes I just look at the reviews and move on, then I noticed the word length and I decided to give your story a shot.

This may not mean much but this is one of the best Gargoyles FanFiction I have ever read! You bring a depth I have missed in watching the show growing up! I am eager to share this journey with you!

Thank you for posting an amazing story!

I FINALLY had time to sit down and catch up on your story. I LOVED it, your hard work into this story paid off. I am looking forward to reading the sequel!

I hope that’s your writing has gotten better, and that you don’t drag out stories unnecessarily like you did this one. It’s a great concept yes, but the dialogue doesn’t work for someone in mid to late 90s. A lot of the dialogue was also repeated often and unnecessarily.

Ok overall great story. And I will be reading the sequel.

My little nitpicks don’t really come in towards the end, condoms are meant to be used one at a time and come in different sizes. And since human males can get pretty big thanks to steroids and male enhancement products there should be a theoretical size for Brooklyn since in that universe tech is much more enhanced. Or use a diaphragm for birth control with a spermicide. I don’t think IUDs were released at that point in the 90s and tbh they hurt getting put in and taken out and most drs recommend you have at least once child before getting One. Also Brooklyn being “too big” is a bit ridiculous. A new born baby’s head os the size of a personal watermelon and we have to push that out of our body (some babies can be up to 20lbs and delivered naturally while others do have to be born cesarean). And I doubt he would be packing that much. I get it’s FanFiction but I’m also thinking about body proportion unless she is shorter than me (5foot) feel free to ignore a woman who has had a child and had been reading these for 17years. I have been where you are and this attempt was better than mine when it came to citrus content (hell I didnt even post mine it was so bad)

Okay, firstly-WOW. The last time Disney did even something REMOTELY this dark was "The Black Cauldron"! But you've demonstrated that there are somethings even scarier than the Horned King. Kevin was flipping evil and crazy; and he was offset nicely by Rose and Brooklyn's romance and love for each other.
And Rose as Hela's daughter?! Something tells me the sequel is gonna be quite a ride.
Meanwhile, this was a great story of love and its ability to heal. Brava!

eek oh my god that cliffhanger Rose is a GARGOYLE now please, please please tell me this will be permanent puck is a genius just think if rose stays a gargoyle her lifespan will be longer and her and Brooklyn will be able to spend a long time with each other on equal footing ohh i can not wait to see how you conclude this story keep on being awesome i hope this isn't the end of this story maybe you could do some oneshots of rose and brookyln's lives i would love to read something like that.

The end of this last chapter had me think like what if demona was rose mother that abandon her because she was human for a second. Just thinking bout Demona know magic an is the only gargoyle who turns human in the day an so what to say if she gave birth to Rose she be born as a baby human or a egg it a small possibility.

Been reading this about every night. Loving it so far and can't wait to see what happens!

I'm looking forward to this next chapter. I want to see how Rose will react in this situation will she loose her self to her powers or will she try to get Elisa and the police involved. Or break the Gargoyles free an hurt Kevin by her self.

~do you feel like a man when you push her around~ can’t remember the song but yeah I think you know what I mean

I really love the direction your going with this story but I will admit I'm curious.
1. Are planning to do to Brooklyn what demona done with puck making her human during the day but a gargoyle at night or give him the freedom to transform at anytime.

2. When you thinking bout revealing what Titania to Rose or Puck.

Excuse me, I would prefer a gargoyle filled year thank you very much. It’s awesome to see Xanatos start to show his cunning side to outsmart Kevin. This whole temporary separation is going to be difficult for our two lovers. Gosh hopefully the quarrymen don’t find her. I am really curious to see what Puck panicked and went MIA. I look forward to your next chapter. Happy holidays and happy New year!

loved the newest chapter, i really hope that rose and Brooklyn will be able to have children of their own like Angela and Broadway. i'm sad that rose and Brooklyn have to be separated for now until the clan deals with Kevin but my heart still hurts for rose and brooklyn. i'm not sure if i'm being paranoid but i really don't trust Xanatos with rose especially considering a few chapters back he was acting really shady not sure if he has any schemes in the works, he talked about rose's powers and about possibly using her as a weapon against the gargoyes which dosen't sit well with me. anyway on a brighter note i love the advice that akira gave rose she is really lucky to have a sister like her i am loving their friendship can not wait to read the next chapter.

I am shook. I can’t believe Kevin got away! I am wonder if the quarrymen know how crazy Kevin is. I doubt the clan will find him the same night, maybe after rose recovers she will train with Puck on how to fight with her magic.

I know you’ll fix this but I kind of hate you right now for this cliffhanger that’s what your amazing heart wrenching emotional writing has done to me I hope that bastard get’s what’s coming to him and rots in hell. My theory for this chapter, is either something extraordinary happens or her magic does something to help rose that could help save her life since this story has magic in it could rose possibly become a gargoyle? Because I recall from a past chapter that when Brooklyn and rose’s hands connected they saw a vision of rose having a half human half gargoyle hybrid or that could be just me reading into things either way can not wait to read more keep up the good work