Absolutely adored these two, and their cute/sexy/wonderful story. I was especially struck by the emphasis on consent in this story without overdramatizing the event, and the struggle between Katie/dad as it’s a very real kind of situation with some members of the older generation. (Who cares about their genitals, dad!)This Edward is super swoon worthy. Thanks so much for your talent and time dedicated into this story. Stay healthy!

"This may be the last time we get to do this"..."And one day it will be true". That give me the feels. I think about stuff like that all of the time.

He's kicking him out cause he's jealous.. That's so petty and weak, You can't provide a solid reason why he is kicking Jasper out other then Bella.

If it were me.. I'd call Edward all types of names too. Just cause you like a girl doesn't mean you get to use me to impress her, fuck you.

It's not the same thing... Bella and Jasper had some type of relationship in which they fooled around now and then.. So he wasn't a stranger on the street.. He behaved like a asshole but the sitatuion isn't what Kate made a comparison too.

As long as Edward isn't a rebound, I'm ok with this.. he's obviously gonna pine away after her if he doesn't get the balls to ask her out.

I’ve loved this; your words, your story, your realness. Your Edward is just the sweetest with B, I can’t deal!
-Gigi xo

Me, me, me

This was really good, i enjoyed the “different” approach you took while writing this. Its so refreshing to read a realistic and progressive story. Loved it. Thank you

Theres a lot of... UK lingo that I do not understand lol

So easy to love this story. Thank you for your words

These two were wonderful, thanks for sharing!

Yes girl, get it Bella!

I love Edward and Katie's relationship!

loved your story. really loved your EdwardBella. thank you for sharing

Beautifully written and made me happy, thank you!