| Reviews for Shade Fury: Tannski |
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Ranger Wheatley chapter 3 . 7/8 I am! And this is an interesting and new idea! |
Ryder chapter 7 . 6/29 Important question: Is Hiccstrid a male or female? Or non-binary and just doesn't have... ahem parts to know their gender? |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/23 looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work. |
Eris chapter 17 . 6/18 Awesome chapter. So fascinating and exciting. Great idea with the twins having their secret unique intelligence. Hope you update soon. |
Jake chapter 2 . 6/17 It’s because they were, or did you forget the part where the R.D ate the Gronckle just because it didn’t have a big enough catch for it? |
Umbra Lycan chapter 17 . 6/14 hope things work with getting a new job, and keep up the great work with this story, still a very interesting concept for how to train your dragon, easily one of my favorites |
R37uy chapter 17 . 6/14 Well, you got that end message right for sure lmao This chapter didn't disappoint. It felt highly believable based on all of the previous character development, and I like how Stoick ends up feeling pride towards his son's resolve instead of hatred. I believe this is due to how much confidence Hiccup shows in his plan, something he distinctively lacked at this point in canon. It's a change for the better, for sure. That's all I have to say for this chapter, so keep up the good work! I'll be back next chapter to review again. |
R37uy chapter 16 . 5/25 Ooh, looks like it's finally time! Here's hoping the reveal goes better than canon. Although I guess in canon it wasn't much of a reveal than a massive jump to conclusions. Eh, whatever. Sorry I don't have much to say this time around. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Wolf chapter 15 . 5/6 Personally, id like to see more details in the fights, but that would most likely require you to go to m and that would mean most wont be able to find the story right off the back. Youve done a great job world building and I hope you'll continue after the first movie, this makes me curious how you'll handle the other creatures in form of fusions and the like. A firewurm queen, probably a fusion right? Or a general queen to hive thing? Either way, great work so far my dude. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
R37uy chapter 15 . 5/3 Another good chapter! A bit of rather major charafter development from Stoick,which is good. I never result understood why he was so againstead breaking tradition in canon even though people were dying as a result. It feels more realistic that he would choose ending the bloodshed over continuing a war for the sake of 'tradition.' It looks like Hiccup and Astrid dodged a bullet (err, bola?) at the end. I find it funny that it was the twins that almost discovered the secret purely because of how over the top they are with their ridiculous theories. Well, either way, I'm looking forward to more! Keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/22 Looking forward to the next chapter |
R37uy chapter 14 . 4/20 Wonderful chapter! I'm a tad late reading the chapter, but I was in the middle of finishing up another fic. Oh well. Anyways, I enjoyed the character development shown in this chapter. It's nice to see Astrid 100% on board with Hiccup's shenanigans, and I'm curious as to whether the village will find out about their fusions at the upcoming meeting or sometime later, probably during or shortly after the Red Death fight. I'm looking foreward to more! Keep up the good work! |
Wolf chapter 14 . 4/20 Alright, I gotta ask. Is some combinations have multiple limbs, and usually get larger, does that mean any thing can be added from these forms? Like we know heads can be added, and wings, and tails, so can extra stomachs or fire sacs or whatever is used to breath fire? And if so, does that mean some dragons have multiple reproduction systems? *goes cross eyed* does the shade fury have to dicks? *goes double cross eyed* does the astrid/hiccup for have both? I think I'm thinking to far into this, I'm going to go lay down and pour bleach in my brain. Great story though, can't wait for the next chapter! *pours bleach in my ear* |
7sky chapter 14 . 4/19 "I hope that punch was platonic" Ridiculous line and I love it! |
stephen51991 chapter 14 . 4/19 "I hope that punch was platonic." I actually WAS drinking something when I read that. Can confirm, it was spit-take inducing. |