First of all, your story is very good. No offence here, but what I don’t like in the story is Ron's portrayal. If I didn’t know any better, I would say this is a typical Ron bashing and twin worshipping (they may appear as funny and all good, but like many, they have done terrible things in their life) story. (And he's not biased against Slytherin as he appears, he wants to be in Gryff because everyone of his family is in it. He spent a whole life time of listening to his brothers how awesome Gryffindor is. Malfoy didn’t help his emotions either, if Malfoy gave them a good impression of Slytherin and befriended them?; ) Ron has a good mindset to be in Ravenclaw (Skilled in chess to beat Mcgonagall in eleven, got seven owls without putting much effort in to study, better than both twins and remembered a hiss for five years, and some fools say Ron is the dumbest charracter of the series.)

And if you’re going to change Neville's wand, change Ron's too. He uses wand of his brother, Charlie. Its half broken. (And Ron could have gotten Neville to the hospital as well, he was no slouch in fist fighting either.)

Keep up the good work.

(Canon) Well, from Ron's side, Hermione just humiliated him out of arrogance. She didn’t *just* tried to help. Both at fault for that conflict, Athena is taking Hermione's side here.

Oh I hope there is a story in the newspaper about what happen and it reflect poorly on the headmaster for what he said and his inaction's. Maybe some speculation on why this happen on this day when Athena shows up. A bit suspicious. even have that he said he would personally go over the wards and try and make it sound like he is overhauling them which should force him to do so. something that will have the relevant people keep a closer eye on Dumbledore and what he does and does not do.

This is a great story. I like your take on the chapter. I'm excited to see the next one. I still don't trust Dumbledore. He's acting odd.
Thanks for the update and stay safe.

great

very good

f ron

great chapter, keep up the good work

Ehh... you're forcing the Troll issue even though Hermoine unquestionably has friends in this story?

A age line that keeps anyone under the age of lets say 21 out of that corridor that will eliminate all students from crossing and I doubt there is a teacher there that is under 21.

A truely beautiful story, loved reading this. NevilleXOC? is Neville the new Harem protagonist? Next time on DBZ *cough* Athena Potter :D

I love your style please keep on and making my day

Wow! This story is ace! I love story's like this were they are so full of detail. When it's a story and a world that I love I don't think it could ever be too long! Keep up the fantastic work!

I like that Minerva was open with them. I also hope that she rips Dumbledore's head off if he made a betrothal contract with Malfoy. Thank you for the update.

can't wait to read more