| Reviews for Guardian Of The Abused |
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   Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 17 . 8/12 Love it:) More please:) Hope to read more soon:) Hope you have a good break |
| The God Of Nerdiness chapter 8 . 8/12 Flames are stupid. Why try to put a damper on the author's spirits when you can offer constructive criticism instead? Anyways, cool story, but i found a few grammar and spelling mistakes in the last few chapters, nothing major though, keep up the good work |
| ShadowThanatos chapter 16 . 8/1 Amazing story! This fanfic is filled with so much detail that it seems like an actual author is writing this! Can't wait until the next chapter! -ShadowThanatos |
| ShadowThanatos chapter 11 . 8/1 I am pretty sure I know who Traveler, Forge, Healer, Archer, Midnight, Beauty, and Lieutenant are. I am pretty sure that they are some of Percy's friends that died. Ex. Archer could be Zoe Nightshade and Beauty and Forge could be Silena and Beckendorf. I could be wrong, but that is who I think they are. |
| ShadowThanatos chapter 10 . 8/1 There is a ton of mystery that is shrouding this plot and I LOVE it! This story is absolutely amazing, and I can't wait till you shine the light that reveals everything that is happening! |
| ShadowThanatos chapter 1 . 8/1 Really amazing! Pretty good detail and a decent sized chapter. Can't wait to see the rest of the chapters! |
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 16 . 7/28 More please:) Hope to read more soon:) |
| Arraia chapter 16 . 7/27 Perfect and update soon please |
| Arraia chapter 15 . 7/17 Perfect and update soon please |
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 15 . 7/16 More please:) |
| Flashlan chapter 14 . 5/26 I am a big fan of Hans50's work, and I know that the son of Zeus has a different name in that story. That is why I noticed that you put Zane instead of Ryan in one of the paragraphs. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/26 Also you mentioned leo but no calypso is she still on the island? Cause she would fit right in in percy’s camp. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/26 I’m confused is this chapter before the last two? Cause it mentions clarisse at camp olympus still when last two chapters she went to live at percy’s camp with the kids. So did that just not happen or something? Or did i misunderstand something big? Also did they make a statue of percy or something to honor their hero they betreyed? Great chapter by the way just confused with clarisse part all the other reactions of the councilors were great. I especially liked the part about the moonlace with katie that was expertly written. Nice job can’t wait for the next chapter!:) |
| Arraia chapter 14 . 5/28 Perfect and update soon please |
| MortemPlasmon chapter 14 . 5/28 I will say if people are like me and basically only use the FanFiction Phone App then we can't even see the polls at all, and need to find a computer that works, and given my Laptop died at the beginning of quarantine, have not had time to replace it also hate typing on phone HoPe for more Thanks MortemPlasmon |
