Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
vickiel2r chapter 16 . 8/30
As long as Christian and Ana are keeping their relationship secret from Raymond, they will be guarded in talking about themselves to other people. Only Jose has really figured out about their connections so far. Mia could become a source of jealousy if she thinks she can knock on Christian's door anytime, just to thank him. Maybe she got the message he is already taken. Thanks a lot!
tinera.brown1 chapter 87 . 8/25
Love this story please hope there's more
daytonalay chapter 87 . 8/18
Ana is protecting what's hers, Gia was too much to try seduce an unmoving Christian. Yes, agree, Ana may never learn what Ryan does to Gia. All she knows is to make her suffer not dead. Our beloved couple is getting very close, on same page, on matters close to their heart. I wish there are more chapters instead of it ending soon. Thank you for gracing some many story updates and your time spent for our pleasure.
snoopylover60 chapter 87 . 8/18
Loved it!
Misssee chapter 3 . 8/11
I was shocked Christian killed a man. Mafia stories are always difficult for me. I am trying to see how endearing some people can relate to mafia hit men.
Misssee chapter 2 . 8/11
I enjoyed this chapter. Raymond is not treating Christian like he wants his eliminated, but Edición would have finished him if Ray was not in the car. The overall chapter was informative. I liked how Christian did not give up his buyer. I also liked how aware he was of his surroundings which gave him time to hid the money.
vickiel2r chapter 14 . 8/8
I am way behind in this story so my comments is not to predictthe flow where it is headed to. Do I have the feeling that Raymond may actually like his daughter happy having Christian around her as her bodyguard. Will have to find out.
vickiel2r chapter 13 . 8/8
I believe they are not just sleeping buddy anymore, romance is in the air. Raymond can't be that completely oblivious about them.
velosews chapter 86 . 8/7
Finally Ana has stated what she wants and for good reason. Nicely played Mina.
daytonalay chapter 86 . 8/6
Go, Ana for taking matters into her own hands. Gia deserves the severe beatings from Christian. He gave it to her harshly. Love how Ana is turning badass, even Ryan is at her command. Rather than wait for Christian which will be a long time. Can't wait for next chapter. What, only a few chapters left? They just began their life together as husband and wife. Love this great story, too. Thank you, Mina.
irma.walsh chapter 86 . 8/6
Yey Ana!
Gowildcats chapter 86 . 8/6
I’m stunned that CG was so forthright and told her bluntly! Same girl, same. Lol
roxieroxie chapter 86 . 8/6
go Ana go!
vickiel2r chapter 11 . 8/5
Ana did not want Christian to tell Ray anything about them. He made a promise, so Ana will have to tell Ray sometime if she wants to continue with Christian. Can hardly keep a secret when they are surrounded by people loyal to Ray and what could Flynn be planning now that he was outed by Ray via Christian.
vnss chapter 85 . 8/5
ooohh i hope they have one of each! a girl and a boy!finally gia's going to get what she deserves HAHAHA. she's too desperate for cg's attention. what a girl...
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