Very nice story. Will this get updated in the future? Sad to see another story end like this.

Omg this is so cutttttteeeee! And also Mimzy is a bitch!

Outstanding work on this story!

For your first story, it's actually pretty good! Thumbs up!

I like the ways your story is going. Also very nice oc. This is like episode of the series.

Check out A peaceful Afterlife on Wattpad. Good fanfiction.

I thought nifty was the cook

Alastor was his Denon name. They have something called a true name. Their names as human.

Hilarious. A few words gave wrong spelling. Still have issue of not putting dialogues as separate lines. The story feel a bit stiff. Rather bland.

Don't have to post Author notes as Chapters of it's own. Also, is there a plot? Or this going to be just daily life going through shenanigans of Hell?

Name:Vermilion
Race:Bird Demon
Abilities: Pyrokinesis, Aerokinesis,War fan proficiency.
Cause of death:Burned alive
Appearance:Look at Monet of one piece.
Replace green with red.

Eye colour:Icy blue

Likes:Fried chicken,Taking over Hell,Killing in general

Dislikes:Other overlord,Lucifer and Lilith,Alastor.

Personality,:Ruthless,sadistic,arrogant and polite.

Age:500 years old. Look to be in her early 20s.

First don't slan so much OC into the story. Wont be able to connect to any or create plot progression. Here is mine. I'll pm the rest.

Name:Vermillion,race:bird demon

Kay.

Love the reference at the end. And bravo. Major improvement form the last several chapters.

Your formatting sucks. Grammar is good. Love Hazbin Hotel. Need to separate it into different paragraphs. Separate the dialogue from the description.

5/10.