Reviews for Book 1: Harry Potter and the Choices that Matter
fhl1234 chapter 8 . 6/28
Nice Christmas hols.

Ah the mirror. I can see why Harry and Neville wanted to visit it again, they've both had hard lifes so far. Glad it was moved.

Glad to see Harry and his friends learning so much.
fhl1234 chapter 7 . 6/27
nice game.
fhl1234 chapter 6 . 6/27
Gotta love flashcards. The studygroup was a brill idea. Your version of the troll incident was far more believable than canon, even though Harry and a seventh year battled it, they still got injured and it took Professor McGonagall to truly defeat it. Lovely writing per usual.
fhl1234 chapter 5 . 6/27
Terrific chapter. Harry really is doing well at learning magic. Draco deserved the laughing charm and hitting the wall after what he and his friends did to Harry.
JayMJane chapter 14 . 4/18
really good story. thanks for posting. I enjoyed it immensely, despite my bias for disliking Hermione. she's too annoying for my tastes.
Reckless-R chapter 14 . 4/2
wonderful! I did find myself skimming a few parts at the start that were quite similar to the original. not a bad thing I've just read them so much I struggled to focus but luckily our first introductiontoharry had me intriguedto keep reading past those few spots. otherwise a brilliant, unique and well written story. Thank you!
sohamzone chapter 14 . 3/20
Nice read. Eager to move to the next book
sohamzone chapter 2 . 3/20
Up to the second chapter now.. this looks promising.
ArgentRoseSableWolf chapter 14 . 3/13
It's an interesting story so far. Your Harry develops in a credible and logical fashion. I don't think much of your Dumbledore though, he seems to be the same moral coward that he is in canon, clinging to his high-minded principles no matter what price others have to pay for them, refusing to act if it means having to get his lily-white hands dirty. Snape is Snape, a contemptible excuse for a human being no matter how you slice it. You've added some real dimensions to the supporting character cast as well. And I look very forward to Draco Malfoy eventually getting the severe and borderline terminal ass-kicking he so constantly begging for.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/10
Really enjoyed this with real characters than sock puppets.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/8
You’re awesome, realistic but not boring complex characters and situations as well as Harry’s reaction to constantly being on guard finished your story in one sitting in one day thanks
Guest chapter 14 . 3/5
After having spent so much time in the hp fandom, it's tough to find new well-written fics. So finding this one was something of a surprise. I must say, I'm shocked that this story doesn't have more publicity, it's one of the best I've read in a long, long time. I sure hope that you would see this series through to the end. Well, I'll go and start book 2 then. Keep up the good work.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 3/4
I’m intrigued by the book description, but I plan to wait until the series is complete before I try it out, so hopefully you do intend to do all seven years (and perhaps beyond).
Skyfire511 chapter 14 . 3/3
OMG! So loved it! I loved how you really weaved the difference into the story so that it was really natural. So cool!
StrengthAndHonour chapter 12 . 2/26
I see a lot of Ron in myself. I'm surprised and disappointed...
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