I think my favorite thing about this story so far is that the mario brothers' mother is named Mama Mia. That is so adorable!

It's pretty well written and the reason he wants the power star to destroy the dark power inside him is genius!

Hey, great job on this story! :) But...you accidentally reposted Chapter 18 over 19.

Surely a cool story

This is a really cool start to a story we all know so well. I love the cinematic descriptions and details! I'm definitely interested to see where it goes.