interesting

Amazing chapters and plot idea

Me encanto tu historia y ame el final

Really enjoyed the whole story, keep up the hard work

Eu gostei muito da fic, e achei o final interessante, melhor que aquela porcaria apresentada no cinema. Me pergunto se haverá alguma continuação para Rey aprendiz de Plagueis.

Ohhhhh que final interessante! Terá uma continuação? (Torcendo as mãos aqui, kkkkkk)

The ending killed any enjoyment of the story

I have to thank you for writing this history and I really loved Astral , she was the kind of character star wars really needed . Maybe I was sad with the ending because Vader is my favorite character but yeah you follow cannon and we knew the end would be on death. I agree that rise of skywalker destroyed ROTJ completely, the sequel movies are a slap to the face to the fans and rey got all powerful and become a Skywalker . So hopefully you write more fics soon

Fantastic!

I loved the story I just don't understand the reason for introducing Plagus. He served no point and from reading the last chapter (end author note) he was never going to serve a purpose. So why? Ugh... good job with what you set out to accomplish but it's so frustrating that for all intents and purposes the existence of this story amounts to the same as Plagus' introduction, excitement followed by a feeling of why.

Awful ending

Aaawwmmm eu sabia que seria triste. Absolutamente frustrante.

To me this story felt like a repeat of game of thrones; great start, horrible ending.

I'm not angry I'm just disappointed

Vader seems a little oc to me