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For those that want the hotter "deleted scenes" of this series, click here - s/13436646/1/Just-Add-Making-Love

I know some people out there might not like Kelly and Jake breaking up, but I say good for you for doing that. Hannah and Darbie represent the dream of young lovers becoming married and living happily ever after, while Kelly and Jake represent how the romance between you and your first lover may not last. Also, I think it's an important message you got here about how a girl shouldn't revolve 100% of her life around her man since that'll cause her to lose her identity. And props to Kelly for knowing that if her man is never gonna be around to raise a kid, then she shouldn't have a kid with him to begin with.

All in all, great series you got here. I hope you make more chapters featuring Kelly finding new love. Maybe she can get together with another character from the show. Not really any other male characters in the show she can get together with now, so unless you've got an original character planned, maybe reveal Kelly is bi and have her get together with Zoe (Kelly did move to where Zoe lives now).

I just want to say I love the scene where Darbie proposes to Hannah. It's hot, and yet innocently heart-warming at the same time. I've read so many fanfic stories that feature marriage proposals, and this might be the most unique one yet. I laughed and cried, and thought it was so cute and hot all at the same time.

Is this really the end?

Wow
Can’t wait to read more
I love this story

Nice
Can’t wait to read more

This is such a beautiful and cute story. You can really feel the passion between the characters when they talk. Also, love the third chapter and how the characters don't get things quite right at first. It's beautifully realistic and works well with the tone you got. Although, like the previous commenter said, it be nice to get a full sex scene going. Although I also have to say in response to that commenter... really, you want to see Hannah get pregnant? You know girls can't girls pregnant. ;)

Cant you give us the sex scene and make Hannah and Kelly get pregnant?