Viserys is stuck , good chapter

Found this story via “A Tale of Two Dragons” by Belisarius55 ... much like I did with that story, I FLEW through this one. I blitzed it within 24 hours. Can’t wait for more updates.

Loved this chapter hope Daeron returns home know it’s probably not gonna happen but wish they would hatch dragons way early but great chapter.

Yo, great chapter, wonderful POV. Nice to see Viserys, the greatest Hand, but way too dutiful and with too much emotional problems to properly connect with his family.

Wanted to see a bit more on Dorne's diplomatic arrangement after the war, but I guess it leaves some mystery for when Aegon return's there to rule it. And it would be hard to write the political clusterfuck that would be.

Either way, great chapter, can't wait for more.

A good chapter and a well-written and interesting POV.

What the fuck...
I think you may need to check the formatting. Its nothing but a giant wall of text.

Very interesting

Starks meddling in southern politics frequently meet bloody deaths.

So Lord Qorgyle holds a personal grudge against the Martells. This can make him an important asset for Aegon when he will start to rule Dorne.

Looking forward to the chapters where he knows more , good work

Seems Tyrell won't die this time , maybe Aegon would realise the trick earlier chapter

The Blood's there now they need fire

Good Chapter, it does allow for her to forgive him and I wonder if Daemon will be born here too but Targaryen

Dragons yess

I thought of Daeron's Conquest in this way too , hope he doesn't die

Decided to reread the older chapters.. quite a turning point here , good chapter