| Reviews for Mirror |
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   AgosDelGrosso chapter 15 . 7/27 Slowly things start to make sense and I'm loving it. I'm not a fan of Ginny and Harry but it's okey for now. Hope you keep going! |
| geekymom chapter 15 . 7/20 Fantastic chapter! |
| geekymom chapter 14 . 6/7 Terrific chapter! |
| Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 12 . 5/11 Woah! This is an excellent fic! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/2 I just stumbled across your story. The storyline is amazing. It’s crazily intense! And poor Harry, I wish for someone to just take him in his/her arms and take away some of the pain. Please update soon, I can’t wait :-) |
| detektivloki chapter 12 . 4/24 Update please? |
| geekymom chapter 13 . 3/22 Terrific chapter! |
| geekymom chapter 12 . 1/17 Fantastic chapter! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/17 I’m trying to get into this but I don’t understand what the goal of your story is. I thought it was a Harry angst and alone fic but it’s not. It’s also hard to understand at times. |
| geekymom chapter 11 . 12/23/2019 Fantastic chapter! |
| Echonite chapter 10 . 12/16/2019 I really liked the view you gave in this chapter. I thought it was well done. Please continue with this story. |
| Murai-Sakura chapter 2 . 12/5/2019 Hmm, I'm terribly sorry but I can't get into this. It feels as if you're trying to use as many difficult words as you can - possibly by using the synonym function of word - while still not making correct sentences. It's quite difficult to read. Might I suggest you try 'Grammerly'? It's free and easy to use and has helped me out a lot. In the meantime I have to say I'm sorry. I was willing to give this story another try and read chapter two but I can't get past your erroneous way of writing. The idea is good if in need of development. Should you ever attempt a rewrite after correcting your mistakes, I'll be sure to give this another go. MS |
| Murai-Sakura chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 Okay, here we go. I fully understand the temptation to write a Snape mentor fic as I have felt the pull myself and I commend you for giving it your best shot. I think this could be interesting but I also think you need a beta. Sometimes your tenses are off and at times, the chosen vocabulary seems... wrong. Especially in the first few paragraphs. I don't mean to be rude or anything, truly! But I think you could get a lot more trafic if you have someone read over your chapters and correct any errors before you post them. I'm only saying this because I think this can be fixed. There's so many fics out there that are obviously past redemption but yours could really become good! Defenitely don't give up! After all, we can only improve with practice. MS |
| geekymom chapter 9 . 12/5/2019 Marvelous chapter! |
| geekymom chapter 8 . 11/28/2019 Fantastic chapter! I would like some flashbacks, just not in gory detail... I have a very vivid imagination. |
