Reviews for Pocketful of Starlight
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 3/4
Interesting. Most interesting. Keep writing
Erick.Moony chapter 1 . 1/18
I liked your OS so much that probably anything that happens in the series will not leave me satisfied. I wish your ideas were cannon cause I love them.
Libra-no-ninja9 chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
.PERFECT ! No seriously, if Miraculous Ladybug wasn't mostly a kid show, this is the kind of content I would very much like to see in the cartoon. There is so much to say and ... I don't know where to begin. I like the idea of Marinette using therapy and meditation techniques to deal with her negative emotions, by accepting them but not letting them get the best of her, and the way she told Hawkmoth and his akuma to back off was so great, but with all the sadness and fear she must feel with all her new responsabilities and her guilt in the cartoon, I'm very afraid of Marinette being targeted more by Hawkmoth again, if Gabriel really fixed the peacock miraculous, then when Nathalie's get better, he could use the same plan he put in place during the episode Ladybug. I know that as the new guardian of the miracle box, the lost of all the temporary miraculous holder and Hawkmoth access to a traduction of the grimoire, Ladybug and Chat noir could be overwhelmed, and damn they deserve a fucking break after season 3, especially Marinette. I really hope that despite her new responsabilities, she will find comfort and support with all the Kwami, I think that she should start always having 2 or 3 miraculous with her that mean Tikki, Wayzz, and one other kwami each day, it coul be good, and since her and Chat noir can no longer call their previous, I think that until they find others, they should do what they did in miraculous queen and combine miraculous powers, at least when the power of a specific miraculous is required.
As for new allies, I have no idea, she could still swap miraculous but I the risk of Gabriel/Hawkmoth watching more closely the previous temporary miraculous holders and taking them hostages is very hight. Before he only knew about Kagami and Chloé being Ryuko and Queen Bee, and could easilly watch them as Gabriel and didn't attack probably because he wanted Chloé as an allie and because Kagami was the dougther of a business partner, but nothing now is stopping him from targetting the others friends of Marinette and Adrien. Personnally, I could very well imagine a fox Kagami or a turtle Luka (who will pass from a reptile to another ) but Marinette will probably put aside all her previous allies during the season 4, of course we still have the others classmates and we already have an idea about which miraculous avery one of them get, but the ones Miracle queen revealed were the most interresting in my opinion. Max really had a good developpment during season 2 and 3, and did great during his first time as a hero, Kim went from a little bully to a loyal goofy friend who basically saved everyone in party crasher, and whom my only reproach wuld be that he beleives Lila lies (just like everyone except Adrien in Marinette's class anyway) I d'ont need to tell much about why Nino, Alya and even Chloé were so important as miraculous holders, and Luka and Kagami both were perfect as the snake and the dragon holder, Luka would probably have been a great ladybug and Ryuko a great cat boir in another life.
Brief, there is so much potential for season 4, so much theories in our heads, and so much time wainting it is so frustrating, long live fanfictions really.
also your work is touching, entertaining and remarkable, thank you for sharing your stories :)
I would like to end with Chloé case, I too is saddened by her choice in miracle queen, even if Ladybug did hurt her by casting her aside, Chloé should have given her a chance just like Adrien and Ladybug did many times with Chloé. I think that if Chloé was indeed getting better as a person (she was still selfish, arrogant, mocking and self-centered, but very less cruel and less of a bully person) she she wasn't understanding and integrating the responsibilities and virtues of a true heroin. She still could have learn, true, but not necessarily as queen bee, she shouldn't have thougth that she obsolutely needed the bee miraclous to be a hero and help ladybug, LAdybug may have made a mistake by chosing Kagami over Chloé, but Chloé made a lot of mistakes during her life, and she willingly betrayed ladybug, while Ladybug herself always try to do the rigth thing, but I'm still glad that Marinette is still willing to help Chloé improve and stoppinf her self destruction, and I really hope Chloé will not ally herself with Lila in season 4 in order to hurst Marinette and Ladybug, because if she does, the charcater s dead to me.
Creepy-Pasta chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
Okay, you deserve to hear this. I absolutely love your story, it's great. And as someone who is studying meridians I was very impressed, I hope that you will continue writing.
DragoonSensei chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
This was so touching so brilliant.
This was art!