Nice.

This NEEDS a chapter two. The reactions. How they interact at school the next day. The confrontation with Gabriel. I need more!

Hi! It's nice to see you again! Thanks for the wonderful story!

I was so expecting Adrien to say no about his father.

Woah- That was-

W o a h.

Very nice. Mind if I give you a bit of... um... Let's just go with I'm going to give you how I felt about it. Sorry if I hurt your feelings in any way, but... yeah.

I know you said you were a bit rusty. The transitions between characters and time sets were a bit confusing. It was kind of like they could read each others minds and... it was kind of scary. Also, why did you keep saying "Chat Noir?" It's "Cat Noir." It's fine, though. It's like you're speaking French for Cat, which makes total sense for a story based in France. Other than that, the story was really nice and the grammar was really good. I love how you changed up how they met.

Thanks for reading, if you even do. Haha...

n/ n! 3

Wow. I loved that. A Lot. The way it ends makes the whole thing so powerful, I felt it. No words, just this was great.

Wait... what? O: that was a surprise!
I loved it!