Sorry to hear that. Take care, dude!

No worries!

Again, Amazing. Really good story. It definitely gives you a sense of living the scene as a third party observer. You are some kind of special writer bro!

Hey Zelevas, Great writing skills ma man! Good and immersive story. Really made my brain picture every detail as i was there every step of the way both in the prologue and here! Congrats man!

Oh no, poor girl. Getting let go is rough. Here's hoping she gets swept up in whatever the alien-watchers are up to!

Feel free to take a hiatus as long as you want!

Hate using a review myself like this, but just a quick update, I'm still working on the next chapter but it might take a bit as I've been kind of sidetracked with Stellaris and another faction I've started to flesh out recently.

So they've left us a gift on the moon, huh? Wonder what it is.

Aww. :-(

How could you?

Looks like the humans are aware!

New Event Chain: The Coming Storm.

A few typos here and there, like 'observatories' instead of 'observatory's'.

One little note about ending quotation dialogue. Actually three:

When afterwards you do NOT say how it's said, you end with a period and capitalize the next word. Like so:

"Alright, let's go." Then she stood up.

If afterwards you DO, you end with a comma and lowercase the next word:

"Alright, let's go," she said.

Lastly, !, ?, and ... all override the period/comma, and proper nouns override upprecase/lowercase:

"Alright, let's go!" Amanda shouted.

Hmm, now this is interesting. So an empire got ripped apart in a war, and is coming to pre-FTL Earth? Wonder what they want with Earth, and what's there that they couldn't get elsewhere.