Reviews for Forbidden Fruit |
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![]() ![]() This story is very good too! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon plz loved it want more |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon plz loved it want more |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Adorei |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story has started off great with multiple avenues it could travel. I hope you update soon! Keep us interested with your awesome storyline you have created! I want more, please! First off by getting rid of Gretchen...lol. Then let the drama begin! |
![]() ![]() Great chapters. Ana as Taylor’s daughter can be disastrous to Christians health lol. Oh my, poor Ana. Her life has been turned upside down by monster(s). I don’t what happened to her but I can just imagine by her wrist other injuries. She obviously needs help. A therapist. Taylor can only do so much if she won’t open up to him. It’s nice to see Taylor so protective and in daddy mode. I thought he was going to shoot Christian and ask questions later. Christian is an ass for holding onto her after she started fighting him. He of all people know how it feels to be touched without permission. Now he knows how deeply Ana’s been hurt and how deeply she’s still hurting, maybe he can be more sympathetic, helpful and watch his tone when speaking to her and where he touches her. Now that Christian Knows Ana was bound and held against her will, I’m curious to know what his reaction will be when he’s entertaining his weekend guest. As for Ana’s mom, what a bitch. It’s obvious Ana has been through something horrific. How could she turn her back on her own daughter. Looking forward to the next chapter. Until Later’s:) |
![]() ![]() Poor Ana. Cannot imagine what she has been through! So excited for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Wow! This is going to be a great story! |
![]() ![]() Great story. I wonder if Christsin is thinking Ana as a submissive. I hope not. Taylor will kill him. Ana must have been brutally attacked. Christain needs to stop thinking of her as a sub. But I hope that they become friends and maybe even a couple. Thank you Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start |