Reviews for The Legacy of the Heroes of Olympus: The Lost Hero
Guest chapter 26 . 5/12
Can't wait until the next chapter.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/2
Awesome story, I hope you keep updating!
Eternalking500 chapter 26 . 4/9
Awesome chapter, hope you update again soon.
redlox2 chapter 26 . 4/9
interesting chapter and i liked you used Leo feeling like the 3rd wheel with Naruto own experience of it. although in Naruto's case its kinda he is too clueless about girls to get hints rather than the right person not being there for Leo (yet)

Naruto sure is wise but understandable he is not willing to do everything (he is teacher of the team not the leader).
redlox2 chapter 25 . 3/29
heya~~ been awhile! you doping ok? I am liking this chapter(s) as i think Naruto experience is really starting to show. I like the description as a 'bridge builder'.
Eternalking500 chapter 25 . 3/29
Awesome Chapter, i hope you update again soon.
Eternalking500 chapter 24 . 3/28
Awesome Chapter, hope you update again soon and im glad your doing good as well.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/4
Shit! This is giof
Guest chapter 23 . 12/13/2019
When will the new chapter be uploaded?
redlox2 chapter 21 . 10/30/2019
The Uzumaki boy who already tricked you once into thinking he's someone else?

Man that is a burn on Naruto! I know in the first book he did it simply because he didn’t want to be recognized like Percy was (and labelled a terrorist like Percy was) but still it was kinda bad of him not to show his real face to somebody who he expected never to meet again. It was cautious but those hurt feelings of not being trusted are not rational (so the hurt is still there even with a reason). I will grant Naruto had no true reason to undo his transformation (as he thought Piper was a pretty younger girl but mortal as he didn’t sense anything ‘off’ about Piper)..,
redlox2 chapter 19 . 10/30/2019
this was pretty good. I saw Jason jealous in the last chapter and its good for Jason to admit feeling some jealously (despite it not being the typically 'hey hands off my girlfriend or at least girl i consider a closer friend thing') as Naruto has ZERO interest in dating anyone (and everyone can see it from just looking at him) but still admits to himself he could use Naruto's help.
redlox2 chapter 18 . 10/30/2019
This chapter was ok, naruto knowledge of Greek mythology helped out. And a perk of being so famous (and yet modest) is even minor Gods have heard of Narutos achievements (plus a champion of Hestia also has some steel street cred).

Jason slight jealously is justified as his dad is Jupiter (who is a rather proud God), heck the only reason Percy was not jealous of Naruto in the first series (unlike Percy with thalia initially) is because they are best friends from the beginning.
clynch3 chapter 14 . 10/27/2019
im sure there will be romance for naruto
we just have not seen it yet.
redlox2 chapter 17 . 10/29/2019
I can see some of the effects of Naruto being on the quest more clearly than i did in the other quests to be honest. Naruto experience is really panning out as Naruto hints at the main boss (Gaia) much early on then the canon book does and he explains about giants being unkillable without Gods and Demigods much early on as well.

I cant wait for the next chapter when they get to Quebec and Naruto will meet Khione who i don't know if she will try to flirt with him like Jason or she will treat him as the threat she knows he can be (as she is working for the Giants and Gaia)
redlox2 chapter 16 . 10/28/2019
huh? sorry abit confused... Annabeth warns Jason to let settle things with Thalia before he reveals their relation but it seems weird to me. Is it me or do Thalia and Naruto honestly not seem that close or more acquaintances than friends? (she doesn't give him a hug like she does Percy and Grover after becoming a hunter) and Thalia and Naruto have very few scenes together and they kinda seem pretty formal to me.

any chance you can help me out?
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