| Reviews for The Grandline Jinchuriki |
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helrio uzugaku chapter 7 . 7/24 Ok, it's fanfiction so it's dismissable. The red line is the EASIEST method of crossing into the NEW WORLD, it isn't exactly a checkpoint. What you were looking for is reverse mountain a mountain with four waterfall that fall UP the mountain and carry ships up said mountain into the lone water channel that doesn't flow upward which empties into the grand line. I never understood how common people from the grand line could leave the grand line because of this fact. The red line is also where the holy city of merejoise sits, the home of the celestial dragons. Ugly bastards that they are. The more dangerous method for crossing into the blue seas but infinitely easier for Naruto and co, is to cross into them using the CALM BELT. The calm belt separates the grand line and new world from the four seas. So I was understandably confused this chapter. |
Borello chapter 7 . 7/10 interesting chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
Gamelover41592 chapter 7 . 7/9 excellent work on this chapter |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/5 You forgot reiju |
C chapter 6 . 4/3 Like the story. Also is Reiju removed from the harem, because I don't see her name on it? |
Borello chapter 6 . 4/1 good work and really funny prank. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
WhateverPlus chapter 6 . 4/2 I like this chapter, continue please. |
Drakon45 chapter 6 . 4/1 Yeah. Naruto now has a bounty and is labeled a pirate. |
R-king 93 chapter 6 . 4/1 Awesome chapter |
Gundam Meister Uzumaki chapter 6 . 4/1 did you remove nami and robin? i didn't see them in the harem list. |
Gundam Meister Uzumaki chapter 6 . 4/1 did you remove nami and robin? i didn't see them in the harem list. |
Gundam Meister Uzumaki chapter 6 . 4/1 did you remove nami and robin? i didn't see them in the harem list. |
Gamelover41592 chapter 6 . 4/1 excellent work on this chapter |
Battlewolf1992 chapter 6 . 4/1 It's to bad Naruto can't use the King of Hell to cure Quiet and before the announcement of the official harem i was going to suggest Ember and Nevan DMC with Ember either eating the Plasma fruit or having already eaten a logia fruit similar to Ace's but a blue flame version and Nevan being her guitar and having it somehow eat a Zoan Bat fruit variation either succubus or vampire or a paramecia that turns her into either one that also gives her the power to switch between both forms and use electricity and bats swarms so the both of them could b nthe musicians or the group but knowing Haruko is here things will be even crazier with her around lol also still hoping Stitch will be our Chopper and if he is will he stay as he is or will he be able to get stronger through training like Haki and others or through devil fruits? |
fenixrojo36 chapter 5 . 3/23 Sigue |