A good story, I like it. Congrats. Keep going this has much potential.

I think you should have stuck with the voice you started with, or you will need to rewrite the original chapters to 3rd person voice. That would probably be an interesting writing exercise, though.

Dare you to make it a draco/ron pairing no balls

So they moved from the classroom where they were fighting into his office at some point. Then Fleur walks along a corridor and sees the office wall explode? Or was that meant to be the classroom? Then Dumbledore arrives with a phoenix capable of teleportation and evacuates students even while Crouch has already fled (assumedly past Fleur and Emilie while doing nothing to them and with them doing nothing to stop him). Dumbledore, again with teleportation doesn't catch Crouch?

Harry loses a vial of blood somehow, again bit odd unless he summoned the blood I guess. And on top of that Harry ignores the double Crouches on the map despite all of the stuff with Pettigrew and the map at the end of his last year.

Don't know. I've really, really enjoyed this fic so far but the characters were a bit OOC for this fic in this chapter.

It's a good story though I don't like harry pushing away fluer as it reminds me too much of canon harry doing the same thing with Ginny to keep her safe other than that it is a good story but damn it crouch took away Harry's blood. Harry really needs to get stronger as soon as possible. He doesn't have enough time.

Great to see an update to this fix!
The 3rd person perspective was also really well done.
Personally, I think you should continue it. It reads much easily than the 1st person imo.
There was one time where I think you slipped into 1st accidentally, but overall it was well done.
Really liking how this is turning out, and also how Fleur seems sure of what she wants. Will save them both a lot of time and heartache in the future.
Looking forward to the next one!

I know it's been a good year since this has been posted, but if POV's are going to flip, maybe go with third person instead of first?

To be clear I also kind of like they got wrecked in a way, like the hand thing was sort of amazing and opens the door to Snaoe redemption which I am confident you can do well if you want to.
I just hope they at least got some hits in and maybe there is a bit about them needing to work on teamwork and "fighting" not dueling. Not just a talk about how "They are kids so cannot hope to be as good as him"

The worst part about this story is the fact I discovered it before it had more chapters/before the chapters where Harry finally says "Fuck it" and gets with Fleur. Clearly his attempts at distancing are not working.

I am admittedly pretty bummed a good chunk of this was dedicated to what you are doing with Draco, they got so badly wrecked, and that you teased us with Fleur's conversation without delivering on it. I am still definitely looking forward to more though. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us! It is currently one of my favorite stories, I lovewhat you are doing with Ron and I am normally a fan of Ron bashing stories since I don't really like canon Ron. So that's high praise.

Great chapter. You definitely were right about the brutal magical combat part.

This was everything I was looking forward to.

Glad to have you back! great chapter!

great one

Great to read more of this!

Happy to see an update!