Reviews for In the Night
Guest chapter 21 . 9/22
Coming back to reread this story because i really want an update, but i just had to laugh. Arresting a Patrick of the Isle? And where are they gonna send him Ben? The highest level of punishment IS the Isle. He’s truly too naive for his own good.
GammaRay3 chapter 21 . 8/28
I was only supposed to read the first chapter to get an idea for the story...and here I am, hours later and on chapter 21. Please continue!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/8
Please please please update!
Scar chapter 21 . 6/28
Update. Now!
sotisrockar chapter 8 . 6/13
Please continue with this story, it’s soo good!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Please update soon! I love this story soo much!
Scar chapter 21 . 5/17
Oh goodness ️ You not very helpful Ben.
Adhara Sophie chapter 21 . 5/9
~continuing, because I accidentally sent the last one~
I feel like even in the movie Ben is simply too naive or in denial when it comes to the Isle, I love that he actually gets to understand the gravity of the situation here.
Also I'm glad that more facts are coming to light, and the plot is developing nicely, wich leads me to: Maybe you should think about longer chapters, even if it means updating less, small chapters feel more like a tease, the plot feels incomplete and having a low words/chapter rate might be a deal breaker for some readers (for lots of reasons, that might not apply to you, but they wouldn't know if they didn't read).
Anyway, this story is fantastic, and I'm really excited for everything that's coming. Hope you're well and safe (and writing lol)
Adhara Sophie chapter 21 . 5/9
I've got admit that I laughed a little with Ben, "arresting someone from the Isle" is such a Ben thing to say, he does realize that the Isle IS the 'capital punishment' in Auradon, right?
Godschildtweety chapter 21 . 5/9
Nice
Ashsmee chapter 20 . 5/6
Love the new chapter! Can’t wait to read what’s next!
Godschildtweety chapter 19 . 5/5
Real good
Adhara Sophie chapter 18 . 5/4
Hi, I hope this finds you well and safe, reviewing to tell you I just reread the whole story, and it's a really great one. I hope you're planning to finish it, even though it's been a while, it's one of my favorites and I check it all the time for updates. The last chapter was really tense and ended in such a crucial part of the story, I feel like this will be a major turning point for Mal and Ben's relationship, it might make them closer or completely push them away, and I really wanna see what you're planning for their future.
KaylaChild chapter 17 . 12/15/2019
AHHHHHHH! SO GOOD! I’m so in love with this story! Can’t wait for another update!
Adhara Sophie chapter 17 . 11/18/2019
This story is insanely good, I like where you're taking this, and super curious because right now Mal's still in denial and she an overload of things she still have to deal with. I'm living for your updates, that's just it.
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