Hi! I really liked your work! So I want to ask you, can I translate it into my native language? If that I the Russian. I need your permission to publish the text on the Russian-language site. I hope for your permission!

I feel this. That harsh lashing out, when they're really just scared.

Beautiful, perfect,
I love it!

Same guest again, but I just realised the reference to the town where everyone was nice, with Della blinking one eye!
I love this!

This was perfect!
I honestly feel like Louie and Della's relationship was never officially mended, and this helped a lot.
In the future, you could do a story on their relationship as it heals.