please don't forsake this fic yet! It's not perfect but I look forward to an update if you decide to continue! I really like the direction and am curious about how things will go from here.
-Ghost Saga

I know it's been about 4 months sense this was last updated but I hope there's more in the future.
Though if I had to say anything it feels like things are going a bit too smoothly for Akira.

One single word. PERFECTION!

Interesting story.

good good

This is a really interesting story. Can’t wait to see where you take the characters going forward.

:)

This just need the Unravel Theme song opening with Akira sitting on the chair instead of Kaneki.

more

Good Chapter!

FANALY! Someone made a Persona 5 x Tokyo Ghoul fanfic crossover! Honestly, what took people so long!? Can't wait for next chapter.
Also, I expect from Akira to have Yusuke make a mask and not go to anime Skrillex.

Hey there idea Crossover for you
Tokyo Ghoul and Arfirutia from Commonplace to Strongest Crossover

Not a bad story idea, but I think it could’ve been written better. It seemed a little rushed and unrealistic in a few ways.
For one thing, if Akira is supposedly as strong as or stronger than when he defeated Yaldabaoth in high school, shouldn’t he be able to put up more of a fight against Rize? I know that he’s not in the Metaverse, and he doesn’t have anything that can actually harm a ghoul beyond summoning a Persona with an Evoker, but he can at least dodge better. CCG investigators, who are also human and receive no Metaverse aid, can at least dodge a few hits from a ghoul. Akira, who certainly has the fighting capability to dodge or at least avoid direct hits even in the real world, should be able to last much longer than Ken did in canon.
For another, the gang accepted that Akira is now a ghoul and just KILLED SOMEONE WITH NO REMORSE way too easily. They wouldn’t betray him and bring him to the CCG, but they’d take longer than a few minutes to accept those facts. If it were realistic, they might have to think about it for a few days and question the morality of it until they reach the conclusion that he’s still the same person they know. Even better, the group would take varying amounts of time to bounce back. For example, Ryuji, Morgana, and maybe Makoto would recover the quickest and the others would slowly follow suit over the course of the next few days.
One last thing. Akira feeling no remorse at all for the guy he just killed is extremely unrealistic. He might be willing to kill for the sake of his friends and he might even not be opposed to it, but he WILL still feel guilt of some kind. Sure, dude was a bit of a jerk, but there’d be a lot of bodies if every dude who tried to flirt with a younger girl deserved to die. It doesn’t change the fact that he KILLED someone, and by his own hands for the first time.

Excellent, I really want to see more. Please, keep up the good work.

Ohohohoho so intreating great