Just stumbled across this little story and absolutely adore it. I just wish it was longer
Very well written and I find the premise of the story quite original. Kudos to you

Thank you for the up date...I love sequels please let us know once things are switched over !

I love this story! Are you going to continue it?

Now THAT was a great reunion story!

Absolutely brilliant!

DASH! I have not yelled in a good long time but I’m yelling now! the ing s and get to the actual ing! I feel so teased! You might’ve said their was less smut or maybe even no smut but I chose to ignore that because I didn’t think you’d really do it. My one glimmer of hope is that you said you may add snippets of their life to the story. I’ll hold out hope that maybe one of those will be smutty.

You know I only yell when I love something. So therefor you must know how much I just adored this. I love a free and relaxed Sev, and he just melted my heart with the way he was with his daughter.

That moment when she realizes he is her father just tore my heart out and then put it back together in the space of a few seconds. It was so sweet and heartbreaking at the same time.

I always hate the idea of lost time so that aspect of the years lost with his daughter just kill me. And the years lost with Hermione too because despite her being unsure at the end, we all know they are freaking perfect for each other!

Dammit Dash! Even the kisses were hot I needed a fan. And I needed it so much that’s why I didn’t throw it. I was tempted. Sooooooo tempted. Maybe I’ll throw it at the ducks. I will forever be mad at ducks.

Snow out.

Dash! You put me in your story! You put me in your story! And you kept quiet about it! I love being the feisty book store owner. I LOVE IT. I only wish you had let me hex Ron’s balls off. *pouts* And Claw is in it too! Yay!

I went through a whole gamut of emotions in this chapter. Anger, love, sadness, giggles, incredulity. You are an amazing author in how you can lead the reader through all of these emotions without it all getting tangled up.

The billow and the obviously have killed me. I am ded. Dedded.

I’m writing this all out of order but I love Sevora’s name so much and you paint such wonderful imagery of her. I can see her face exactly. I’ve also decided that Madam Shaecia would have unofficially adopted her as a pseudo-grandchild.

Ron is such a useless twat. Harry isn’t much better but at least he comes around.

If anyone was in doubt about what happens if you fuck with Hermione Granger, this story would put them to rest. Just don’t do it. She will hurt you. Lots. I loved that line about how Hermione had shown she was a lion and not a raven. It was perfect!

Poor Hermione fainting dead away. I’m sure Severus would have that effect on me too.

I’m reading the next chapter immediately. So get ready for another review.

Snow ️

Great story!

beautiful story loved it. just wish it was longer.

Amazing!

Cute :) I love how she billows _

I loved this story! I would definitely like to see what happens between Snape and Hermione.

This was a really good story, thanks for sharing!

I love this! I do hope you expand on it one day!

Absolutely Wonderful! I loved your playful writing style.