i love this

Blood for the blood god

It is fun how you wrote her education and how she coped with the school :D Later Ki as a bloodthirsty soronita, that's nice! I think that the chaos gods now see how awesome she is :) as for psychic powers, Khorne despises soccery! So even better that she isn't a psyker.

I like the story so far.
Though I do have a problem with it: There are so many grammatical mistakes. Words written incorrectly and sometimes no stops between sentences.

An idea for you would be to put it into something like MS Word or a free equivalent, set to english. It will show you words that are written wrong.
Or you search for someone who would check and correct it for you before you post.
Or (I assume english isn't your first language) you let the Google translator (or similar) translate the text back to your language. And see if there are words or sentences in there that absolutely make no sense.

I have to say, this story is very tasty and spiced with a very very hot blood red sauce! You need to continue with it. I want to read more about her, and how she will become a renegade chaotic khornate soronita.

*pulls up chair*
Oh this is going to be goooood

Forgive me, my Emperor for what I must do. unzips. pants*.