interesting story and chapter, good job

Hmm another interesting chapter. Vampires and werewolves are going on here and it's very intriguing.
A few typos here and there but it is very nice and I am curious to see what happens next.

Hmmm quiet the interesting start here
Werewolves are always interesting
though one thing, to keep the suspense, the part of "It was as if... he would become a wolf" that line doesn't need to be there. The uneasy feeling gives the reader enough idea how it could be happening to Riku

Other than that I don't know too much off FF8 but I am curious to see what you do with it