Please update this Motherfucking story! It awesome!

PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Please update again soon as you just got to the good part and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please continue this fic, cause its great, I really like it.

I think that maybe Enshin should have a harem/ party of his own, like of course Shizuku and maybe Tio as she's a dragon species just like him. And, Suzu Taniguchi too.

Also, maybe have Enshin manage to redeem Reichi Kondou and save him from death, so he joins Enshin's group.

I love what you're doing with the story and for Enshin's harem I can definitely see him being with Shizuku and Tio, can't wait to see what else you have planed for the rest of the story.

have you read the other arifureta fanfic? it has OC as protag and its utterly slow in plot development but the character development there is good.

it's also nice when the OC/MC gave a touch lashing to kaori and shizuku. kaori for not considering hajime's feelings and how her approach cause hahime's problems with his classmates and shizuku for not doing anything. she's unlike kaori who has tunnel vision on her pursuit, shizuku understands but let things happen.

the conflict between the two friends will collide it will be like Lelouch and Suzaku from Code Geass Archer and Shirou Emiya from Fate Unlimited Blade Works Goku and Majin from DragonBallZ Akira and Rio from Devilman Crybaby Jonathan Joestar and Dio from JoJo phantom blood. Dante and Vergil from Devil May Cry.

Damn. I stumbled onto this story and I'm already in love with it. Like how Enshin is helping Hajime be better right off the bat and the bromance they have. Feel like Enshin won't keep his mouth shut anymore when the priest tells them to give up when they tell them what happened and maybe that's why Enshin went down there to get his friend back.

Hiyama better sleep with one eye open. The second Enshin learns it was him that attacked Hajime is the second he stops living. Can't wait to see how the dragon and demon hybrids take this world by storm when they meet back up. Maybe have Enshin get his own ladies too. Can see him paired with Suzume, pretty sure I spelled the name wrong, and maybe Tio since he's gonna turn into a dragon if I'm not wrong.

Huh, one person becomes a Dragon and the other a Monster? That's interesting.

Wonder if they would start a revolution?

please more

Glad for updates. So...Enshin's dragon's name is Gradion huh? That's a good name. Gradion and Enshin relationship just like Naruto and Kurama. Oh yeah did Gradion knew Tio Klarus? If he knew Klarus Clan that will be epic if Gradion and Klarus are same races.

Add Tio to Enshin harem, that will be fits on him both have dragon powers, wise, and honorable. If Hajime become Monster and Enshin become Dragon, they will become deadliest duo or brutal duo called 'Duo Monsters'/'Monster Brothers'/'Hell Monster Brothers'. They have own harem, travelling together as adventurer (for Hajime); blacksmith & merchant (for Enshin) as his jobs selling kitchen knife or knifes or swords.

Keep it up for your story. Good job,

Things keep getting more interesting.

Enshin will probably knock that some sense into him

THE POWER OF BROMANCE WILL PREVAIL!

Please don't do any Yaoi, please? I liked Enshin's relationship with Hajime as is. That is 'Best Friends For Life and Death' and 'Bro before ho'.

So the dragon is actually a dragon god? Cool, I hope we get to see more Dragon powers from Enshin.

I was hoping that having a friend like Enshin when both of them are at the abyss, Hajime would gain the confidence in fighting but without going to insane and becoming the edge boy that he is in Canon.

Maybe have Kaori come along to help him be more stable or something.