I enjoyed the story. I love Tiva stories.

Wonderful story perfectly capturing Tony and talis emotions as I expect they would be. Please keep writing!

Aww sweet - I hoop we get to see this family reunite

Terrific. More emotional overload. Tiva forever.

Fantastic. Emotions overload. Tiva forever.

Liking this story a lot. Thank you for writing. sl_52311

I'M CRYING (IN THE OFFICE whoopsies) THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Thank you for sharing this with us fans 3

Loved this m thank you

Great! Love Tony and Ziva's interaction. All the emotions and honesty.

Tali & Ziva at the end is so sweet. :)

Finally reunited

This is quite possibly the most beautiful thing I've ever read. You wrote Tali and Tony's relationship with such tenderness and love and my heart is absolutely bursting. Thank you for tackling the fact that Tali has been through trauma and needs a way to process it. I can absolutely see her having a fear of people leaving because of what she went through at the farmhouse and after. All the little Tony thoughts about Ziva are so spot on. Really amazing chapter.

So cute!

Nice one.
A very raw and emotionally honest feel to it.
Tali is too cute toward the end.

Tony is an awesome dad.
Great story so far. Looking forward to more.

Excellent!
Very Intense.