I feel like a junkie, feeling that euphoria after getting some of this good stuff. I adore the ship.

This was pretty sweet, though the timeline was a bit disjointed, and I feel that the dialogue could have been a little bit better. Like Emiya's reaction to Robin should have been to deflect, deflect, and deflect even more. "Oh, I didn't take you for the type, Robin Hood. To carry such jealousy in your heart.", and then have Robin get mad, but also point out it's not him that's jealous and that Emiya a dickhead etc. etc. For example, in his first meeting with Lancer, I expected him to namedrop her title as King of Knights immediately to show off a little and to distract Lancer from the topic with which in mind she had approached him. Then again, FGO Emiya's dialgoue really isn't up to par compared to his other appearances, so maybe he's lost his touch there?

Also the training scene felt off; purposeless. Emiya is efficient and about rational tactics, so there's no point in trying to build up Ritsuka's combat ability through training, when there are so many better ways of going about it. But it was for drama, so I get it.

That said, I liked it quite a bit.

A wonderful story for one of my favorite FGO ships. Wish it had more stuff written about them.

Very nice, I am not really that big of a fan of all the alternative Arturia forms. Her Lancer form included, but I must say that I liked her and Archers interactions very much. I am a sucker for SaberxShirou after all and this is pretty much as close at it gets in Chaldea.

mas cap

please make sequel

Please make a sequel, this story is so good!

I really liked how you show the interaction of both characters, I will look forward to the next chapter

Adorable.

Good work.

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sequeland then they f*cked. Happy End

Holy shit, this was great. SwordxSheathe forever. i know you said this is a one shot, but i'd very much like to see a sequel to this. perhaps some small continuations, fragments of chaldea style. i want more and more of this actually. this is damn great.

(Also i really like how ristuka is being a filthy shipper here.)

An excellent love story. The pacing was slow, but didn't drag. The characterization was excellent as well, which is more important to me than perfectly polished writing mechanics. The worst that I can say about this piece is that a few sentences were a bit awkwardly phrased. The dialogue, however, was not awkward in the least. I would be amenable to reading more works similar to this, good job.

I like this, this is nice I wish for more Please.

i ship this