Hey another great chapter and I’m happy that ash is feeling a little better also what you said about that raciest idiot who left that stupid race thing your not the only one who thinks that racist needs to die I’m half black myself and support Black Lives Matter like you do keep up the great work and stay healthy one more thing delete that racism comment in your review it doesn’t need to be there;)!.

Looks like things are getting more interesting also I that ashxmay are definitely be together as for her backstory in johto I just hate fuckin drew to the core I hope he dies in your fanfic but Looking forward to more moments between ashxmay keep up the great work and stay healthy);!.

Great story so far really enjoying it!

Not sure if anyone has noticed but in this chapter you said Ash won the Kalos league but in the description of the story you said he won the sinnoh league

yo whats up with Devin Booker on the cover? This is pokemon...

Can you add more advance shipping moments between ash and may please and hopefully in this story ash isn't dense when it comes to the most obvious things especially love also great chapter and look forward to more it's definitely an interesting story but I noticed in this chapter may wasn't even in it just misty dawn max Brock Gary and leaf not even iris was in the chapter either

No don't turn Paul into a bad guy.

I love it so far keep going.
A dark secret of pallet town? I wonder if it has something to do with Red.

When will wee see may reunite with ash and please do add some advance shipping moments between them and hopefully dawn iris and Misty stay loyal to ash because from almost every betrayal story I read misty dawn and iris were traitors for once have them stay loyal to him and continue traveling with him I feel they have been heavely over used being in the role of traitors instead of being loyal to ash

Like how the story is going... Until the self insert OC. TBH most ppl don't like OCs