| Reviews for Its Me and You |
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WickedlyGleeful chapter 1 . 6/19 just found the story, thought it was AMAZING! hopefully we will hear from you again soon? stay safe. |
bug-16 chapter 5 . 1/29 please update soon! |
Spawn chapter 5 . 11/3/2019 I laughed out loud at Brandon screaming and them trying to be brave by jumping in front Shelby when he didn't know who was at the door. I think Shelby should have taken the money and then thrown them out. Babies are expensive and she all of the help she can get. Shelby wanting to die kind of came out of nowhere. There was no build up to it or anything. If she wanted a quick ending to her pregnancy issues, she should have gotten an abortion. Now she has to deal with everything that comes with the choices she's made. |
Spawn chapter 4 . 10/21/2019 Brandon is the best bestie Shelby could ask for. He's going to be an awesome Uncle to Rachel. Naya really should learn not to f*ck with a pregnant girl. Pregnancy hormones alone can make a girl crazy, so she really picked the wrong person to mess with. Nice slap and zinger by Shelby about working a pole. Good job. |
Spawn chapter 3 . 10/15/2019 Josh is high on the abusive side with all of the rough grabbing he's doing on his pregnant ex- girlfriend, and for someone who said he wants nothing to do with her and to leave him the hell alone, he certainly went out of his way to trap her in the hall with his sicko friends. Shelby's coach, who is apparently named both Coach Johnson and Coach Williams lol, was extremely unprofessional and should be reported to the school board. She have no business working with young people. Go Shelby for telling her to fuck off. Thanks for the update and good luck with your project. |
bproofmgmt chapter 3 . 10/16/2019 nice! thanks |
Spawn chapter 2 . 10/13/2019 So her Dad is fine with her being a lesbian but being pregnant makes her a whore? Shelby is in high school and underage, so no,legally he can't just kick her out of the least her Mother was supportive, kind of, though since they are married she owns the house too and could have fought her husband instead of folding like a doormat. She needs to do better for her daughter and grandchild. I like Mrs Jacobs. I'm glad she let Shelby stay and told her that she knows that she's pregnant. I hope that she continues to be a support system for Shelby and baby Rachel. Stop fighting it, Shelby. You know you're keeping her. |
Spawn chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 I think you have a great start. Josh is a self centered prick. He doesn't want kids or to have the kid to come looking for him when they're grown? What the f*ck? Then use damn condom dip shit. Shelby is better off without him. I would like to see Shelby succeed and continue her education while she's pregnant. Yes, it may be a struggle, but she's more than capable of doing both. I hope that Brandon helps her. I could see him being a great support system for Shelby and eventually Uncle to Rachel. I see where Rachel gets her dramatic tendencies from lol. I'm hoping her parents don't kick her out, but if they do, maybe Brandon's family will take her in as one of their own? There are so many ways you could go with this. I can't wait to see Shelby raise Rachel. They belong together. |