| Reviews for The Great and Magnanimous Escalation Relic |
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   Idiotic Brainspark chapter 1 . 4/27 It's really good. One of the best gamer SI/OC fanfic in the Naruto timeline. Keep it up! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13 I love pretty much everything about this, I especially like the paired down system, there’s just enough there to give the advantage without being too much to make it get bogged down later on, though I’d argue that unless you’ve already fully thought through it you could even get rid of levels entirely and make it purely stat and skill based |
| YukioKasamatsu chapter 1 . 2/14 inspiration |
| SevenBrokenTowers chapter 1 . 1/26 I really like this. Interested in seeing a new chapter |
| Kibo Oto chapter 1 . 1/12 it looks good already! |
| XxWinter-497-RosexX chapter 1 . 12/23/2019 I like it |
| Tagre chapter 1 . 12/13/2019 Really like it so far. Keep up the good work! |
| Cherickson chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 If you could continue this that would be great thanks :) |
| InfinityMask chapter 1 . 10/31/2019 Soo did Minato killed? Btw isn’t Kushina and Minato relationships kinda secret? How people know the wife of Minato pregnant than? |
| FanBoy01 chapter 1 . 10/25/2019 We need more Gamer fics. |
| michaelsuave chapter 1 . 10/11/2019 Well done so far. As somebody who has written gamer stories, I know it is tough with the stats etc. Keep it up! |
| A Loyal Reader chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 Well, when write more? Good lock |
| Naruto009523 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 Well interesting concept really getting sick and tired of the repetition in these types of stories though. I mean the gamer/isekai stories almost always give a choice in clans and every fucking time the authors pick either Uzumaki Uchiha Senju Hyuuga etc. but never have I seen one person choose Akamichi as a choice. I mean you could even combine the bloodlines like say the father is half Senju/Uzumaki and the mother is half Akamichi and whichever bloodline in Kumo has the black lightning and Storm Release bloodlines. I chose this specific setup as an example because I love Chocho as a character especially since I think much like her the combination of Blood red/Auburn hair plus the dark skin and exotic (gold) eyes of a Kumo ninja would make the character look more exotic. Anyways hope you take my idea under consideration please update soon looking forward to the next chapter. |
| GamerDevil chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 Try to let Mizuya be adopted by Kushina as she is alive. Also let Kushina teach Naruto and Mizuya Fuinjutsu. Mizuya with her ridicilus Int stat should be able to fast master that art. I wish for her shinobi specialisation be in following order/priority: -Fuinjutsu Uzumaki style -Kenjutsu / Taijutsu -Ninjutsu -Iryiojutsu |
| The-Funeral-Pyre chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 Fairly solid first chapter. |
